Female Opinions Needed On Story Antagonist

shakespeare_i_aint

Shakespeare_I._Aint
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Hello,

My pen name is Shakespeare_I._Aint. I am preparing a first story for Literotica. As a male writer, my style greatly favors the male reader and his more immediate, short-term adult-literary goal. I write from both character gender perspectives with an equal lack of ability.

I am writing a variation of a Stag/Vixen Blackmail where a new neighbor records a married couple's late-night backyard session on his cell phone and his blackmail demand is basically that the hot fantasies the wife tells during the coitus be made real for the benefit of everyone involved.

If you want an example of my style, the previous paragraph is one sentence, very tight and hard to read and does not carry an extra word.

The antagonist will be making the couple experience sex outside their relationship and possibly video the results for him. I reckon he will also get some type of regular oral out of the deal.

The woman is the average 43 year old wife and mother, American-average in everything except imagination, motivation and execution. She has been given the lead with regard to their sex life simply because she is so much better at it.

The husband is a big bear of a guy, friendly and non-threatening. Good guy. He treasures his wife and treasures her as the sexual brains of the organization.

The story won't have a sharp ending. The wife will have three or four separate 10000 word chapters and I'll call it a day.

At this point, the neighbor can be whatever I want him to be. At this point I only see an older unmarried guy. I see porn as his only current sexual outlet until this opportunity arose. But I don't have a specific body-type or personality for this guy.

If you a woman reading this blackmail/non-consensual story, what type of antagonist would you prefer physically and how would he act? I could make him attractive or repellent. Good hygiene or slovenly? Short or tall? Big or small? Mentally sharp or mentally lazy?

There won't be any threats or violence in the neighbor's makeup. Just the threat of exposure.

Give me a thumbnail sketch of how the protagonist appears to you, if you can. I'd appreciate it.

The first chapter is pretty much finished and the protagonist doesn't start until the 2nd part, which is now.
 
If I were the woman. I would hate if he were a super hot, in shape neighbor who also happened be one who was not very smart or intellectually curious. I would hate that I was turned on by his body and would get off thinking about bending me over but digested by his lack of intellect.

Feel free to message me if you would like more details!
 
I'm not a female, but I am wondering why blackmail/coercion stories are often considered so erotic on this site. I know you said that there is no physical violence or threat of such, but there is psychological pressure.

Do you truly find such ideas erotic? If you do, then so be it. But are you doing it that way because you actually find it interesting or are you merely trying to make the story more popular with readers?

As you know, Lit can get rather picky about non-consent stories depending on what the outcome is.
 
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