Female/Female seduction story

[sexymom]

I haven't seen many "seduction" stories on Lit.--most of them are stories about sex acts, with only a few sentences devoted to how the people got in this situation in the first place. The story I would love to write, but don't have the time for, and maybe not the talent, is as follows:

College girl goes home with her roommate for a long weekend. The roommate is bi, but she has never told her that- waiting until the right moment. Then, on Friday night, at her house, she slowly and lovingly seduces her. The other girl resists at first- she is afraid and embarrassed-- but her resistance is slowly overcome- sometimes with loving caresses, sometimes a reassuring voice, and sometimes a little force. This determined assault finally wears the girl down, and she surrenders.

The seducer has an 18 year old brother who lives at home. The next morning, she goes to the bathroom early, and then leaves the bedroom door open. She makes love to the now-helpless and unable to resist girl again, keeping her on the plateau for a long time before finally allowing her to climax. Of course, her brother gets to watch through the open door this time; his sister does this for him with every new girl.

Of course, the obvious then would be a threesome, but that doesn't turn me on- not that I insist on having all stories my way, but it never hurts to fantasize.

 

[Chicklet]

I *do* like the idea of a good seduction.

Sometimes I think that it's harder to write seduction than sex...so usually I think that I skip to that part too soon. I can't promise to write this story <everyone knows I've got tons going on> But I definatly like the idea of a seduction, f/f, m/f, m/m or whatever. If I write one in the next month I'll let you know.

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

 

[MsLinnet]

i was working on one

Sorry to but in but I know what you mean more of a love story I have posted one on Chyoo but I never did get around to finishing it was supposed to be a month in the life but I think I had a problem with the amount of time I was going to spend on it.
But let me know what you think
Linnet takes Aus

 

[Chicklet]

Chicklet did a really good job of this in one of her stories, the one about the two girls playing the game...damn, I can't think of what it was called. Honey, will you post us a link to it? I'm sure sexymom would enjoy it.

<whimper> what game??? Are you sure it was MY story?

http://http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=102627

 

[penguindance]

 

[NiteRidder]

Seduction Element

I agree with you on the importance of the seduction element- all too often shortened inappropriately. Good sex needs a strong buildup (in life as in fiction) - setting, dress, attitude and most of all the lead-in. If they arn't screemin for the culmination then it hasn't been enough.

What is the matter with letting your lead character tease the boy with her exploits but never let him join in ??

Make your readers want it though, and dangle the possibility of his joining in like a juicy carrot in front of them.

Could be maddening........ and with a nice unexpected twist.


We good guys don't always have to win ........do we ???


Just an idea anyway.


NightRidder

"D"

 

[MsLinnet]

you are so right

 

[penguindance]

 

[NiteRidder]

Characters

Like her Character ideas-

College roommates with the seducer being a worldly young lady and the roommate Miss "Goody Goody Two Shoes" perhaps a minister's daughter would be a nice touch - preferrably one who is a sweet, virgin, wonderfully neive young lady.....little miss gets it all right.... totally disgusted and turned off by her wanton roommates exploits.

Go Get her bad girl.......


The brother ......a local ner do well ......who unlike his intelligent sister is never going to amount to anything, but he is all stud. Handsome....tanned from his construction work and with a gorgeous cock that he loves to display hardened and bobbing in front of him as he struts his stuff. Make your readers want to see him on top of these two sexy intertwined ladies.....make them want to see it so bad they can taste it....... they NEED to WANT him to suceed with these two lovelies.

Makin em want is where all the fun comes in.....!!

Need a great unsuspecting ending which leaves your readers with their tongues hanging out and..... Wow..... on their dry lips.

Just an idea.....Have Fun ......

NiteRidder

"D"

 

[Chicklet]

Re: Characters

perhaps a minister's daughter

is the Minister's daughter over done?

 

[NiteRidder]

No Such a Thing

There is no such a thing as an over done daughter.

 

[lisa804]

If not a minister's daughter, how about the daughter of a "Parents against Porn" advocate who is very involved with her parents anti-pornography campaign.

 

[Chicklet]

If not a minister's daughter, how about the daughter of a "Parents against Porn" advocate who is very involved with her parents anti-pornography campaign.

LOL

I love it!

That is great.

 

[NiteRidder]

Anti- Sput Parents Daughter

Love it !

 

[penguindance]