Female Feedback Desired

[Tony88888]

I have posted two stories on Literotica so far under 'Loving Wives'. I have gotten very good responds (One of them won top overall story for Oct.).

I very much want to write for the Female Readers and would like to get some specific feedback from you girls and women out there. The links to my stories are below.

'My Wife's Fantsy Lover'
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25471

'Discovering My Nasty Wife'
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25477

I would like to hear what you find stimulating about them.

Also, if you would like to see any new erotic senarios, or things the characters might experiment with in new chapters or stories, to make them hotter and more Erotic For Women, I would love to hear any feeling you have.

Thanks loads, I very much appreciate you taking the time.

Tony

 

[tigerjen]

I must be #1 to respond to your poll

Hi there!
Just voted on your poll......one of my fantasies that has
yet to be fulfilled is being with two men (or 3 or 4!).....
which is why i voted the way I did

I will have to take a peek at your stories then......

I have two stories of mine that include a menage a trois;
"Summer Night Passions" & "Surprise Voyeur". I invite
you to check 'em out!

tigerjen

 

[KillerMuffin]

I'm not picky about the subject. I read pretty much all of the categories except for Extreme and generally toys.

I want one thing in a story and it has nothing to do with content or fantasy. I want good writing. Color me picky.

My personal fetish is bisexual men and I don't mean just the unwilling or forced BJ before or after sex. I mean the whole hog jump in the sack and love every minute of it bisexual sex. You didn't have that so I didn't vote.

Anyway.