Female Bounty Hunger / Male Target

[MissManners78]

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[Hypoxia]

My story idea is basically about a female bounty hunter whose target is a male perpetrator who has commited a non-violent tech-related crime like computer-hacking or something, maybe having embezzled a large sum of money from a crime syndicate. She'd have to made a lengthy road trip across a few state lines to get him to her destination.

Female character - I don't want to be too cliche, but her character would be tough, rough around the edgtes. She's been unable to maintain any long-term relationsips and hasn't developed her sexuality much despite being mid to late 30s. But she finds herself highly attracted to her bounty and begins to empathize with him.

Male character - He's maybe 7-ish years younger than the female character, is very intelligent and composed. He knows he's in a precarious situation, but complies with the bounty hunter because he's fascinated by her and attracted to her.

And stuff happens. OK, I didn't think this through, hehe. Just curious since this story could go in lots of different ways, I think . Has anybody seen a story like this? Would it be interesting to read?

So what stuff happens? She chases him. He eludes her. She fucks people to find him. He's on the run so he's unfucked and careless. She catches him. For some reason, they fuck. Maybe he escapes again and she continues chasing and fucking. How does it end? Do they drive off a cliff?

 

[writer2005]

I have some thoughts what if the crime syndicate murdered the computers hacker's family.

And as a way to get revenge on them uses his hacker skills to steal the money from him.

The bounty hunter hears his story and she sympathizes with him.

but she knows he is in great danger because if the crime syndicate people find him he is a dead man.

So she use's her bounty hunter skills to get him the hell out of dodge and while she is working on a plan to get him out.

they develop sexual or romantic feelings for each other.

 

[Hypoxia]

If the syndicate suspects the bounty hunter they sent after the hacker is double-crossing them, she's dead meat too, and she knows it. She catches him and sympathizes and reaches a decision cusp: Haul him in and be rewarded after they kill him? Let him go and hope the syndicate doesn't find out? Take him into hiding with her?

I had a similar conundrum in THE BOOK OF RUTH storyline. Randy and wife Ruth are wealthy ex-pats. Ruth is raped by a politically-connected aristo in Mexico City -- his uncle is one of the PRI 'dinosaurs' that run the country, pre-cartels. Randy finds and kills the rapist but he and Ruth must flee Mexico and drop off the radar so no PRI thugs can revenge the killing.

My solution? Only the rapist's uncle cares about the killing, and he dies of a cocaine overdose while screwing a young hooker. No other PRI dinosaurs want to bother chasing R&R -- they are safe as long as they stay low and do not come near Mexican territory.

Apply that here. The bounty hunter and the hacker have the money he stole. They go into hiding overseas. The hacker fakes news of their deaths -- eaten by piranhas in the Amazon or something. The syndicate no longer looks for them -- but just to be safe, they can never again set foot in any land where the syndicate operates.

Or spin it as a FUGITIVE-like series. The syndicate's other hunters chase them remorselessly. They're constantly on the run and always seem to encounter helpful strangers; sex ensues. Then the helpful stranger is caught in the crossfire and our couple must run again. Cue the cliffhanger endings.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Okay since I'm reading this wrong what the hell is a bounty hunter in this world? Cus irl bounty hunters (I think the technical term is bail collector or something) are legal. The crime syndicate doesn't send them out. They have hitmen and the such. Also generally you wouldn't send them after hackers in the first place there are easier ways.

 

[Hypoxia]

Okay since I'm reading this wrong what the hell is a bounty hunter in this world? Cus irl bounty hunters (I think the technical term is bail collector or something) are legal. The crime syndicate doesn't send them out. They have hitmen and the such. Also generally you wouldn't send them after hackers in the first place there are easier ways.

Yes, Sheila would merely be an on-staff hunter the syndicate sent when hacker Harry vanished with his take. Assuming she's experienced, she is not likely to sympathize with her target. Gotta re-think that premise.

* Given: Young male hacker; older female hunter; she catches him.
* IRL outcome: She tortures him to retrieve the loot, then kills him.
* Desired outcome: She sympathizes, joins forces, escapes with him.

How to reach that outcome? We need a plausible mechanism to convert Sheila from siccaria to Harry's ally and lover.

* Cheap solution: He buys charisma pheromones making him irresistible.
* Clever solution: He reveals truths to her that bring her to his side.

Sheila catches Harry, wires him to a chair, prepares pins-under-fingernails and cut-off-toes interrogation. He says, "Wait, play that DVD first." The video is stuff he compiled while hacking, stuff about her and the syndicate. Yes, he knew she was after him -- he's been tracing her. She learns The Truth about what the syndics did to her family (she was orphaned young), how they recruited, misled, misused her, and who was responsible for all that. Her previous targets included relatives she didn't know she had. She was a dupe.

That should be enough to shift her allegiance, especially when Harry says he knows where to leak info and disinfo to smash the syndicate and destroy those who warped her. What she saw on the DVD breaks her emotionally, breaks the stony shell around her heart. She sees Harry is a smart, decent, warm guy. She falls. Much sex ensues. Well, she unties him first. Maybe.

They must still run and hide from other hunters whilst he prepares the data bombs. They still encounter helpful strangers. Yeah, more sex, until other hunters close in. Then run again.

One weak point: the syndicate always sends hunters in pairs. Where was Sheila's partner? I guess he suffered food poisoning at a fortuitous moment. Maybe Harry arranged it remotely. Whatever.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Ah. See I was reading this more like this.

• Hacker does something
• Law enforcement sends a BH to catch him
• It turns out he screwed a criminal organization at some point
• Said CO sends guys after him
• BH falls in love/lust protects him from criminals while also not turning him in. Possibly because they have contacts on the inside.

Glad I asked cus I was having trouble keepin up.

 

[Hypoxia]

* Law enforcement sends a BH to catch him

Non-federal LEAs (law enforcement agencies) send detectives, not bounty hunters; the latter usually work for bail bondsmen AFAIK. If you MUST have a non-deadly BH in the story, Harry must jump bail. But he's in jail before he makes bail, and the syndicate would likely know which jail, so he would not survive till the bail hearing. UNLESS...

Unless Harry is busted for something not involving the syndicate -- BEFORE the syndicate learns he's hacked them. AFAIK hacking investigations usually proceed awhile before busts are made. So you'll have to work out the timing of events, which would generally go like:

* Harry hacks various non-syndicate financial accounts
* Harry sets up automatic hacks into syndicate accounts
* Harry is busted before the automatic hacks execute
* Harry makes bail and immediately heads underground
* Bail bondsman hires Sheila to track and recover Harry
* Auto-hacks execute while Harry is running and hiding
* Syndicate spies in LEA learn Harry did it; Syndics send hitmen
* LEA sends detectives after Harry; now 3 teams are after him
* Sheila finds Harry first -- but why does she sympathize?

That's a lot more moving parts than my Sheila-as-siccaria scenario and it still has the final conundrum. Why should Sheila help Harry... unless he has something for or on her... and how did he get that? More moving parts... Although you could have a cute Scooby-Doo chase among all the chasers: BH, hitmen, detectives, all stepping on each other. Throw in a Barney Fife local cop and it's great fun.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I hadn't worked out all the movign parts but that is closer to what was going on in my head than what was discussed. Thanks crazy person!

Also yikes that is a lot of moving parts and I hate moving parts.

 

[LadyVer]

My story idea is basically about a female bounty hunter whose target is a male perpetrator who has commited a non-violent tech-related crime like computer-hacking or something, maybe having embezzled a large sum of money from a crime syndicate. She'd have to made a lengthy road trip across a few state lines to get him to her destination.

Female character - I don't want to be too cliche, but her character would be tough, rough around the edgtes. She's been unable to maintain any long-term relationsips and hasn't developed her sexuality much despite being mid to late 30s. But she finds herself highly attracted to her bounty and begins to empathize with him.

Male character - He's maybe 7-ish years younger than the female character, is very intelligent and composed. He knows he's in a precarious situation, but complies with the bounty hunter because he's fascinated by her and attracted to her.

And stuff happens. OK, I didn't think this through, hehe. Just curious since this story could go in lots of different ways, I think . Has anybody seen a story like this? Would it be interesting to read?

I like this story idea. I've read a few series based on bounty hunters, such as the Jane Yellowrock series.

 

[Hypoxia]

Thanks crazy person!

It's brain damage, not insanity. I have a skull fracture to prove it. I have since fried that brain pretty thoroughly. If I hadn't, I'd probably rule the world by now. Right.

But I digress. We can still have that multi-agent chase. The syndicate sends Sheila. Harry did jump bail so the bondsman sends a bounty hunter. Prosecutors send detectives, maybe from more than one jurisdiction, and they ain't friends. Maybe some insurance fraud investigators join the mix. Barney Fife butts in on the BH and dicks. Confusion reigns.

Meanwhile, Sheila saw the DVD and flipped. Harry's payback plans are cooking...

 

[GforGraham]

So serious

Please lighten things up as 99% here only want to read a quick jerkoff story.
He has stolen photos from crime syndicate boss from what was very secure computer system. Turns out these are the only known pictures of this boss so all police forces are trying to get this hacker. The crime boss posts big reward to get photos back and bring the hacker in for their own justice. Bounty hunter woman takes up the challenge.
She has to get information from nerds to track the guy. Their payment ranges from quick handjob, lapdance, up to doggy sex, bdsm etc with men, women and multiples. Let imagination run wild.
She does catch up with him and finds the photos are explicit sex of every description. As transporting him across country she sees his 12 inch cock and, well you know the rest with this.
Cops get close but between her GG boobs and his 12in cock they get out of problems. What cop could resist sex with one or other.

Now she could find out that crime boss plans to dispose of both hacker and the catcher in case catcher saw the photos. So now they are on run from everyone, and must get rid of crime boss to be safe. She did happen to recognise him from a sex club she has gone to when chasing bounty.
So they set up to get him by her getting in club and having sex with her and they can off him. Well before they get to kill he sees hackers giant cock and an all round 3 way happens. He is full hermaphrodite and they can all have fun as M.FM.F and whatever other combos you can put together.
Here is where I weaken. He has enough fun that calls off bounty on them and they screw happily ever after.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I must find humor in someone accusing us of being to serious then presenting a plot everybit as convoluted and wonderful.

 

[MissManners78]

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[Hypoxia]

I just noticed the thread title is about BOUNTY HUNGER. Hunger, yes. The bounty hunter is hungry. She is DESPERATE to catch the hacker. (She needs the money for her kids.) She takes every shortcut, every dodge. What are the implications?

 

[CeasarBoobage]

Yes, Sheila would merely be an on-staff hunter the syndicate sent when hacker Harry vanished with his take. Assuming she's experienced, she is not likely to sympathize with her target. Gotta re-think that premise.

* Given: Young male hacker; older female hunter; she catches him.
* IRL outcome: She tortures him to retrieve the loot, then kills him.
* Desired outcome: She sympathizes, joins forces, escapes with him.

How to reach that outcome? We need a plausible mechanism to convert Sheila from siccaria to Harry's ally and lover.

* Cheap solution: He buys charisma pheromones making him irresistible.
* Clever solution: He reveals truths to her that bring her to his side.

Sheila catches Harry, wires him to a chair, prepares pins-under-fingernails and cut-off-toes interrogation. He says, "Wait, play that DVD first." The video is stuff he compiled while hacking, stuff about her and the syndicate. Yes, he knew she was after him -- he's been tracing her. She learns The Truth about what the syndics did to her family (she was orphaned young), how they recruited, misled, misused her, and who was responsible for all that. Her previous targets included relatives she didn't know she had. She was a dupe.

That should be enough to shift her allegiance, especially when Harry says he knows where to leak info and disinfo to smash the syndicate and destroy those who warped her. What she saw on the DVD breaks her emotionally, breaks the stony shell around her heart. She sees Harry is a smart, decent, warm guy. She falls. Much sex ensues. Well, she unties him first. Maybe.

They must still run and hide from other hunters whilst he prepares the data bombs. They still encounter helpful strangers. Yeah, more sex, until other hunters close in. Then run again.

One weak point: the syndicate always sends hunters in pairs. Where was Sheila's partner? I guess he suffered food poisoning at a fortuitous moment. Maybe Harry arranged it remotely. Whatever.

I was thinking something similar for a plot twist, but with a few small differences/extensions.

Sheila knows she is also under "review" for a few past hits that went bad. Those could have all been chalked up to her previous partners screwing up, but after three times where this partner wound up sleeping with the fish, she is assigned to a more experienced partner. SnakeEyes is a partner that won't hesitate to take her out if she screws up, or if he's bored.

To follow Hypoxia's thread, once they catch Harry and bind him to a chair in the basement of his warehouse lair, SnakeEyes realizes that his phone has no service down there. He goes outside to check with the bosses to see if they want him alive, in pieces, or just a video/photo confirmation that Harry is no longer in the land of the living. Harry begs Sheila to play the DVD, and while it's playing, they hear the scanner come to life when SnakeEyes' call is connected. Harry and Sheila make eye contact when they hear the boss tell SnakeEyes that Sheila must take the fall this time.

Sheila gets livid when she hears of what kind of dirty and evil things should be done to her, all while watching the video of how she's been set up on her previous jobs that bombed. Next she sees video evidence that her family will be taken out after she's done, and she loses her cool.

She asks and finds the weapons that Harry has hidden, then frees him from his bonds. Before he can run away, SnakeEyes comes back into the room. He shoots at his partner and Sheila falls down, screaming in pain when her pistol is shot out of her hand, her numb arm hanging loosely by her side. Harry pretends that he's still tied up, knowing he's a dead man if he moves. Before Sheila can recover, SnakeEyes ties her to a table and cuts her clothes off, punching her occasionally to keep her from fighting back.

As SnakeEyes plays with her, but before actually raping her, Harry sees his chance. He jumps up and retrieves a pistol that Sheila had taken out of hiding and shoots SnakeEyes in the back. His bulletproof vest keeps him from getting killed, but he's still in bad shape. To ensure he's not getting up anytime soon, Harry shoots him in the vest twice more as he lays on the floor.

Sheila moans out in frustration, confusing Harry. She says rough sex turns her on, and now she's desperate for climax, begging Harry to finish the job that SnakeEyes started. He thinks that it's a setup but complies, but never getting to the part of actual sex, making her scream out in pleasure more than once, only stopping when she begs in a whisper.

SnakeEyes is having a hard time moving, especially when they tie him tightly to a concrete pillar, making sure to remove his protective vest so the thick ropes are wrapped brutally across his broken ribs. Since Sheila's clothes are ruined, Harry gives her a large overcoat to cover her nudity, and they start talking about where to go from there. With the data she saw on the DVD, plus what she heard on the call with MafiaHQ, she knows that she is out of a job. Not only is her life now in danger, but so is her family's. She teams up with Harry and they set up a plan to relocate her family to a warmer climate, all courtesy of the bankroll that Harry had electronically stolen from the bad guys.

SnakeEyes is now a liability, so he is taken to the marina. Taking a boat that belongs to the mob boss guy, they handcuff his hands and ankles to the railing, leaving him naked and spread-eagle on the deck. They set the auto-pilot for the open ocean, far away from the shipping lanes, then disable all of the electronics other than the auto pilot. They laugh, knowing the weather will finish him soon. They take the lifeboat back to town and get to work.

The next couple of chapters can cover Harry and Sheila's trek as they try to take down the mob. Harry's status as a loner and a typical nerd keep him from being able to regularly have sex, but Sheila was so impressed with how he treated her while she was bound up, she wanted more of him. Promising him lots of new and fun sexual scenarios ensured that he was helpful with her family's safety. Even more sex, plus money, encouraged him to work on destroying the top organized crime families.

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Sure, it's a stretch, but it's fiction so it's allowed. Even more so, this is Lit, so naturally this cold-blooded killer woman easily switches to enjoy taking down the organization that so recently was paying her nicely for her evil tasks. And of course she is happy to enjoy the sex that goes along with it.

 

[Hypoxia]

I like it all except this:

SnakeEyes is now a liability, so he is taken to the marina. Taking a boat that belongs to the mob boss guy, they handcuff his hands and ankles to the railing, leaving him naked and spread-eagle on the deck. They set the auto-pilot for the open ocean, far away from the shipping lanes, then disable all of the electronics other than the auto pilot. They laugh, knowing the weather will finish him soon. They take the lifeboat back to town and get to work.

Very unprofessional. There's an old list of WHAT EVIL OVERLORDS GET WRONG including gloating / bragging to the tied-up hero, giving him a chance to slip his bonds and inflict justice. Sheila has done hits before; she's a pro. Don't dawdle. Immediately shove an icepick in SnakeEyes' ear and dump the corpse.

Sure, send the mob boss' boat out to sea with SnakeEyes lashed to the helm -- all of him, or merely his severed hands. Sure, that's a juvenile gag to incite the mob when the boat is found. But it also gets cops curious about links between SnakeEyes, the syndicate, the boss, etc. Just more pressure...