Fem-dom story outline

[subbieboy]

Here's a story outline for a fem-dommish tale. Let me know what you think.

Kate is a highly successful businesswoman somewhere in middle age. She was married briefly in her youth, but realized that "marriage wasn't for her." But she still has some maternal feelings, which she expresses in rather perverted ways. A perfectionist and egomaniac, she likes to be in control all the time.

Todd just graduated from college at the top of his class. He's has scored the opportunity of a lifetime by getting to work as one of Kate's personal assistants. ("Kate's boys," they're called in the office). He's from a conservative, religious background and has had sex with only two women, both college girlfriend. Despite being inexperienced, he has already learned that he likes to please women. After a dorky adolescence, he has turned into a handsome young man, but he doesn't really know it yet.

"Kate's boys" travel with her regularly as she jets around the world, getting all sorts of experiences they never expected to have. There are rumors that Kate requires "certain services" from "her boys." The boys never tell, but it's clear that Kate forbids them to date so that they can always be "on call" for her. Working for Kate can open any door later in life, so her boys are willing to serve her every need. (She does not tolerate any shoddy work). In the office, especially after a couple of glasses of wine, she's been known to grab their asses or even tell them to "whip it out." A friend of hers, after multiple glasses of champagne, confessed that Kate likes her boys to be "pretty like a girl, hung like a horse, and obedient like a dog."

Soooooo.....here are ideas for the first few chapters.

1. Introducing the characters.
2. Kate takes Todd with her on their first trip and they spend their first nights together. Mostly hot vanilla sex -- though Todd never knew a woman could be like this! -- but Kate eventually pegs him.
3. Todd spends a weekend at Kate's beach house. After an evening of passion, Kate lets him sleep in. But she wakes him up and tells him to hop in the shower. When he gets done, she shouts at him to run into the living room NOW. Stark naked, he is shocked to find a group of Kate's best girlfriends hanging out. They "inspect" him, feeling up his ass, and stroking his cock. Kate then tells him to get her friends some drinks and snacks. When he screws up one of their orders, maybe giving her a pinot grigio when she wanted chardonnay, or a Sea Breeze when she wanted a Cape Codder, Kate barks at him to come back in the living room. "You have to show these boys who is boss." and she grabs her favorite paddle. He obediently lies across her lap. and takes twenty whacks, until his ass is bright red and tears are welling up in his eyes.

"Back to work, little boy," but after dinner, Kate is craving some more pleasure. She tells Todd to eat her out while her friends watch, and then give her a good fucking. At the very end of the party, only her very good friends are left. Heidi invites them back to her bedroom to watch her peg Todd. When it's all over, Todd is feeling used and humiliated, but also happy that he has served Kate. She cradles him to give him the aftercare he needs. For the first time, she tells him to call her "Mama."

Various thoughts:

I think Kate should put her boys in chastity, not so much to humiliate them, but to make sure they don't fuck anyone else.

There should be a chapter where Todd helps Kate score some major triumph. Todd is an obedient submissive, but he takes pride in serving Kate well. They celebrate with some great sex.

At some point, Todd successfully dislodges a rival to become Kate's "number one boy."

At some point, Kate throws a party for other women who own male submissives. They have a contest as to which boy can be the most obedient. Todd is determined to win.

Kate finds Todd wearing her panties one day. She decides that he should wear them regularly, to remind him of his obedience to her.

Kate and Todd go to a restaurant on Mother's Day and it is assumed they are mother and son. They scandalize everyone by blatantly making out.

Eventually......

Todd becomes so smitten with Kate that he asks her to marry him. She laughs and turns him down. When it's clear that he is crushed, she comforts him by telling he is very sweet and such a good boy, but she's just not the marrying kind. It's becoming clear that their time together is coming to an end....

Over the next few years, Todd rockets to the top in his field. (Rumor has it that Kate, already well known for providing her boys with dynamite letters of recommendation, really outdid herself with Todd). He stays in touch with Kate, who even introduces him to the woman he will eventually marry. (Much like Catherine the Great, who when she was done with her boys, would marry them off to some appropriate countess).

Flash forward a few decades....

Now in late middle age, Todd learns of Kate's death. One of his children asks if he knew her. "Yes, I did. She was a great, great woman." He then bawls on his wife's shoulder.

THE END

 

[AvroAnsonXIX]

Here's an outline for a dominant female story. Let me know what you think.

When this story begins, Mary is a highly successful businesswoman in her 40s. She was married in her youth, to a very like minded man thirty years her senior. They realized that monogamy just wasn't for them. Mary is driven, in business, with her biological and "adoptive" children, and in love -- which some think she expresses in rather perverted ways -- She likes to be in control all the time, even "top from the bottom." Except for when she steps back, and someone she trusts is given the reins.

Steve just graduated from college at the top of his class. He's has scored the opportunity of a lifetime by getting to work for Mary. ("Mary's boys," they're called.) He's from a pseudo-conservative, pseudo-religious background and has had sex with only two women, both were his college girlfriends. Despite being relatively sexually inexperienced, he has already learned that he likes to please women. After a dorky adolescence, he has turned into a handsome young man, but he doesn't really know it yet.

"Mary's boys" aren't just eye candy. They excel at everything they do, future experts in their fields. Good guys with brains, the right mentality and they are physically fit. Mary isn't looking for guys (or gals) who are magazine models. But people who respect themselves and take good care of themselves. Her "boys and girls" travel with her regularly as she travels around the world, getting all sorts of experiences they never expected to have.

It's an open secret that those "boys and girls" close to Mary enjoy "certain carnal privileges" with the boss. It's not a condition of employment, but it is expected of those who wish to learn life lessons from someone who has "been there and done that, thousands of times." It's the difference between being an Astor and merely taking a community college course in finance.

The boys and girls never tell tales out of school, but it's clear that Mary has a big say in their love life. Since everyone in Mary's group is open minded and free from irrational societal norms that set people in opposition to themselves, love interests must be as well. Mary's boys and girls are a team, they have all been vetted, sex is not generally one-on-one, it is everyone who is available coming together as directed by Mary. Relationships between her boys and girls and others are fine if Mary checks them out and determines that they "play well with others."

Such is the business'es reputation thatworking for Mary can open any doorin the industry. Her boys and girls are appreciative of Mary's generosity and guidance, they are more than willing to serve her every need. Within her private entourage work may performed in the nude -- a truly casual Friday -- wine and barbeque being a favorite perk. In the office, especially after a couple of glasses of wine, she's been known to share a seat play with an ass, to fellate or munch on someone as a reward.

Sure, there are many jobs where employees say, "screw the boss." At other places of employment that phase is a figurative one, and not meant in a nice way. Working for Mary, it is a quite literal statement, a quite enjoyable part of the comprehensive benefits package given to "key employees."

Soooooo.....here are ideas for the first few chapters.

(CH-1. Intro.) Steve is graduating from college, recalling a visit to Mary and the business. Steve was "recommended" by a professor -- one of Mary's boys (he worked for her, while nearly-all eventually move-on, most remain part of the social network, and many return to play from time to time -- Obviously everything was not explained to Steve, but there is dialog between Mary and the Professor that lets the reader know what Steve does not.

He is being evaluated to determine if he has the "stuff" it takes to work for Mary. She is demanding as a boss. Told she "couldn't because she was a girl," growing-up, she drives her business to outperform all the others in the field. She expects much and gives much. Her boys and girls must have high standards BUT at the same time not buy-into the self-doubt society sows to limit us.

Potential employees must be team players. Everybody is assumed to enjoy sex. Everybody is assumed to love the field of endeavor. Everybody is assumed to want to succeed, to want their mates to succeed and to help them. So to Mary's mind "everybody should be fucking and sucking and being nice to each other getting their rocks off and blowing the competition away."

(CH-2. New Hire?) Mary takes Steve with her on a "getting to know each other" trip and they spend their first nights together. Mostly hot vanilla sex -- Steve never knew a woman could be like this. Mary tosses out lots of scenarios to see how Steve reacts. The chapter ends with Steve accepting that Mary's way makes perfect sense after which she pegs him.

(CH-3. Orientation) Steve spends a weekend at Mary's beach house. After an evening of passion, Kate lets him sleep in. Eventually she wakes him up with a nice blow job and tells him to hop in the shower. When he gets done, he is shocked to find most of his functional group from work just hanging out naked in Mary's house. They "inspect" him, feeling up his ass, and stroking his cock.

Mary then tells him it's a "work day," and as he is low seniority he should get his team-mates some drinks and snacks. When, not taking the scene for what it is, a test,he screws up one of their orders, for example he gives someone a Pinot Grigio when she wanted Chardonnay. Mary has Steve come back into the bedroom.

"You have to show these people you take this job and everything it entails seriously, even if you are naked. We depend on each other, if a customer wants Pinot Noir we can't give them Malbec." She grabs her favorite paddle. He obediently lies across her lap and takes twenty whacks, until his ass is bright red and tears are welling up in his eyes.

"Now, back you go to work," she says. After dinner, Kate is craving pleasure. Explaing to Steve that infractions are dealt with swifty, but then forgotten just as quickly, she has him eat her out while all watch. Then he gives her a good fucking. At the very end of the day many have gone home but Jenni has stayed. Mary asks both back to her bedroom instruct Jenni on the finer points of peggging.

Steve is in heaven with Mary's pursed lips moving his foreskin back and forth on his shaft and Jenni's plastic phallus bouncing off of his prostate. When it's all over, Steve doesn't know what to think. Only a month ago he would have felt used and humiliated, but also happy that he had served. Now he feels ... totally ... free? Mary and Jenni cradles him to give him true love. "Something those who only play," to quote Mary, 'term aftercare." For the first time, she tells him to call her "Mother."

Various thoughts:

Mary and her boys and girls frequently go to restaurants. Because of her familiarity and her language, calling favored ones "my boy," "son," "daughter," "my girl," and by referring to team members as "brothers and sisters," it is assumed they are mother, daughter, and son. Then they scandalize everyone by blatantly making out. (Including skimmers at Literotica who will try to put the story in the Incest Taboo category.)

Eventually......

Though their professional abilities, tons of great work is done by all. Meanwhile team-members enjoy each other's more personal skills. Over time, recognizing that Steve is a "pairing-type of guy," -- not everyone is -- Mary maneuvers Jenni and him together. They go off and start their own firm in a tropical place both had dreamed of living.

Over the next few years, the two rocket to the top in their field in their market. It's known that Mary only hires the best and being with her for years trumps the most dynamite letters of recommendation possible.

Fast Forward Several Decades ...

Sometime later -- in the midst of the COVID-19 epidemic -- Steve hears a rumor of Mary's demise. The tropical island that she was living on imploded politically. Nobody seemed to be running things, police had abandoned their posts, the hospitals closed and there were no public services or utilities it seemed. This from a quick internet search.

Having the means Steve and Jenni load an airplane with relief supplies and fly to Mary's last known address. When they land they find an 80-something-year-old Mary walking out to greet them. She is naked except for a big Swagman's hat, sandals and a conch shell necklace. She is surrounded by several young men and women, the girls dressed as she is and the boys adding a long pointed New Guinea penis sheath.

Kissing her "children," Mary thanks them for their thoughts, explains that they are "doing fine riding the storm out." She explains that someone will inventory the relief supplies and see where they can best be donated. In the final scene Mary says, "As COO of Omnicorp, I took over the whole island when the civil authorities abandoned their posts after the last contested election. It's good you are here, we can use you both."

THE END

What do I think?

I think you've obviously been surveilling me for some time. You should just knock on the door frame to my grass hut. I'll invite you in. Really, I don't bite -- okay in truth I do bite. But, I've had all my shots, and nobody has ever complained afterward.

aka Mary

*Sorry, Mary loves free, wild uninhibited and giving penises, She could never, ever look into a sad little one-eye and cage it.
**Not liking panties or heels (or clothes too much) herself. She'd never ask someone to wear them. Nipple clamps, on the other hand ... Or butt-plugs ... Well ... "Excuse me, customer service lady, is the Godzilla or the Gorgontulla bigger? 'Cause I have the ..."
Oh and the last two paragraphs are fiction, I'm not quite 80 yet.

aka Mary

 

[subbieboy]

Thanks for the feedback!

A few thoughts...
(1) I like calling the lead female character Kate, because I am a Catherine the Great junkie.
(2) Kate might occasionally give someone else the reins, but only very occasionally. She's a bit of a control freak.
(3) Kate might let her boys and girls play with each other from time to time, but they must understand that their first loyalty must be to her.
(4) Kate might give terrific blow jobs, but only gives them as a special treat to someone who has been very good. She is mostly focus on her own pleasure.
(5) I like both CFNM and women abusing their authority, so I prefer the lead male character being the only naked one and serving Kate's powerful female friends.
(6) I see Kate as childless by choice, but gets her maternal feelings out in a pervy way.

That's a good ending. I see Steve and Jenni as seeing Kate as the most important influence in their lives, no matter what they are doing now.

 

[AvroAnsonXIX]

Thanks for the feedback!

A few thoughts...
(1) I like calling the lead female character Kate, because I am a Catherine the Great junkie.
(2) Kate might occasionally give someone else the reins, but only very occasionally. She's a bit of a control freak.
(3) Kate might let her boys and girls play with each other from time to time, but they must understand that their first loyalty must be to her.
(4) Kate might give terrific blow jobs, but only gives them as a special treat to someone who has been very good. She is mostly focus on her own pleasure.
(5) I like both CFNM and women abusing their authority, so I prefer the lead male character being the only naked one and serving Kate's powerful female friends.
(6) I see Kate as childless by choice, but gets her maternal feelings out in a pervy way.

That's a good ending. I see Steve and Jenni as seeing Kate as the most important influence in their lives, no matter what they are doing now.

You should definitely write your story. It's incredibly similar to Mary's, but not the same. Mary is not quite 80, but she was born when John Curtain, the Earl of Gowrie, Winston Churchill, King George V, and Franklin Roosevelt were the big decision makers.

A few of "Mary's" thoughts about your "few thoughts." Maybe just to bring the perspective of one older female who lived a very similar life into this.

Mary also admires that German princess. Kate ... The name occurs often in my fiction, very, very often as a mother figure. "Topping from the top" can be exhausting, and it can take away from the pleasure. "Topping from the bottom," also works. Something that Mary saw in a completely non-sexual way growing up, was that her mom Kathy (see) "made everybody see things (Kathy's) way and got her children to help one another do everything (Kathy's) way." Using sugar not vinegar.

When Mary is naked, and has a dozen younger guys fucking her who is in charge? Mary is, she is the vehicle those dozen studly guys take to bliss. She makes sure that they all get off really good and she subtly makes sure they know that "doing it her way" means getting to do it again and again and again.

Mary might be a "control freak" in a way, but she has learned physics, timing, and judo. She uses an ounce of exerted energy to deflect moving boulders she doesn't use a stone to overcome inertia. That way she moves 112 rolling boulders with half the energy of one stationary one.

In Mary's life, she is the "mother" figure, the focus of everyone's primary loyalty. This is shown in (the exaggerated account of) Steve and Jenni responding to the unknown by filling a chartered airplane with relief supplies -- and picking a better pilot than Roberto Clemente did -- to fly off into the unknown. It's expected and nice to see her "children" play together.

Only those she has vetted are good enough for them. Besides, the best meals are prepared by chefs who constantly practice their art. Maybe its a male thing. In pre-history an individual male wanted to know the effort he put forward supported his progeny. In ancient times some civilizations opened this to the males brothers, his clan, and the tribe benefited.

Medical science has the vast majority of offspring surviving and most of us living long productive lives. As a race we have more fun now that we have divorced sex fro reproduction. But vestiges remain. (Says Mary, the naked philosopher.)

Mary doesn't pretend to speak for all women -- just the one that is under her desk with her mouth full. But Mary knows that having lots of male and female lovers wanting you and wanting to have sex with you and wanting you to have sex with them is a pretty good way to have a whole lot of sexual energy, and attendant pleasure, focused on Mary.

Everyone has thier own preferences. Mary likes naked people everywhere, doing normal things au natural -- okay ... She thinks New Guinea penis sheaths are cute, especially the really long pointy ones. And sandals are practical, as are wide brimmed hats. But Mary digresses -- In the "family" Mary has created in her profession, all serve Mary and all take care of their brothers and sisters.

In real life "Mary" didn't marry "Wayne." Because it would have really complicated things with Wayne's two ex-wives and four grown children, as well as his business and hers. But Mary had children with Wayne, the Literotica rules checkers will be pleased to know that Mary never talks about her children. Other than to say they are adults now, and may possibly have one or more accounts at Literotica.

--Mary

 

[Hypoxia]

Here's a story outline for a fem-dommish tale.
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THE END

About 920 words, more than LIT's 750-word story minimum. So post it. And save it, because by forum rules, a mod could snip it after the first three paragraphs.

 

[subbieboy]

Thank you.

 

[JJA122]

What does Kate loo like and what POV do we follow?

 

[ChuckWolf]

You have put a lot of work into this, so I agree w/ the others about saving it in your draft folder, so that it doesn't get lost.

I feel like I've read this kind of story before; I think each character's style of dialogue will go a long way in making this stand out.

 

[subbieboy]

Here's the first part of my saga: https://literotica.com/s/ms-legrands-favorite-pt-01