Cruel2BKind
Not Quite Here
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- Feb 3, 2011
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I realize that this section of the forum is less story-oriented, but I have a gay male story and no one will review it in the story-feedback section. Too many breeders.
It got put on the site when the site was suffering some issues with voting and accessibility, so it got very few votes and views. I was wondering if anyone would like to read it, and just give me a bit of feedback on what you think. I tried a new style with this.
The story is about a political prisoner in a future dystopian world. The story is told from a computer file. Transcripts, interviews, and a journal that the prisoner kept. Its a little more plot-heavy then most stories, it isn't just a stroker. But the few people that have read it have said it's pretty good. I would just like a second opinion please!
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/s/file-66
It got put on the site when the site was suffering some issues with voting and accessibility, so it got very few votes and views. I was wondering if anyone would like to read it, and just give me a bit of feedback on what you think. I tried a new style with this.
The story is about a political prisoner in a future dystopian world. The story is told from a computer file. Transcripts, interviews, and a journal that the prisoner kept. Its a little more plot-heavy then most stories, it isn't just a stroker. But the few people that have read it have said it's pretty good. I would just like a second opinion please!
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/s/file-66
