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[_Savannah_]

Someone sent me feedback pointing out that I had an inconsistent date on my "Life & Times of Sultry Savannah" Ch. 01 story. I do appreciate the heads up; the person who gave that feedback is absolutely correct. I had Savannah all tied up dated June 20, 1993, but had the wrong year when she was in Boston - October 3, 1983; which should have been October 3, 1993. A small mistake perhaps, but crucial nonetheless. Thank you very much.
If anyone has ideas, suggestions, or similar comments please feel free to send them to me. Any input is greatly appreciated.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Dates

I had Savannah all tied up dated June 20, 1993, but had the wrong year when she was in Boston - October 3, 1983; which should have been October 3, 1993. A small mistake perhaps, but crucial nonetheless. Thank you very much.
If anyone has ideas, suggestions, or similar comments please feel free to send them to me. Any input is greatly appreciated.

These dates don't make any sense. Did you write about "Sultry Savannah" being ten years old and tied up? Did you write about her being tied up 3 1/2 months before she was born?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=118747MySmuttyHolidayStory

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=207952MyOtherSmut

 

[thebullet]

That's what being your own editor will do. In one of my stories, I had the action taking place in Akron, OH in chapter 1. By chapter 3 or 4 the scene had mysteriously been transported to Cleveland.

Apparently no one saw the mistake but me, but it's been bugging me ever since I noticed it.

Hey, what can you do? You missed by ten years, I missed by forty miles. I guess we have to live with it.





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[_Savannah_]

LOL....I have a lot of stories that I've written...Every once in a while I go through them and see what errors I might find....Always find at least 2 or 3....At least until the next time. Now I have a pretty good spell and grammar checker...so I only have to worry about petty things like timelines and names, etc.

Read some of your stuff by the way.... Keep up the good work.