Feedback

[Nicole]

Hi everyone

Okay what I'm trying to do here is let people give feedback to the writers (old and new) on the stories they are writing in this particular Board.

I know that I for one would love feedback, good or bad. This is really the first time I have done this, sorta had to be pushed into it

and I guess I would just like to know who is reading what I am writing and what they think of it.

I'm not just asking from my point of view as I am sure the other particpants would like to know what everyone thinks also.

Thank-you everyone.

 

[Laurel]

Great idea, Nicole. Since you brought it up, I just wanted to say that I'm extremely impressed by everyone's contributions in this area and in the RPG area - they're imaginative, sexy, and veerrrry fun to read. You all never cease to amaze me... Keep up the awesome work! You're giving me yet another reason to stop in at the BB more often than I should...

 

[Hecate]

Hey Nicole, great idea!! *chuckles* although, I would not really like any feedback here about typos and punctuation and such *s@whispersecrets*

Now - feed back:

I love the high school reunion thread ... that is sooo nice... and there SURE is something going on between Jason and Nikki !!! I can almost feel it "for real" !!! Keep it going please, I enjoy it just as much as my daily dose of "Bold and Beautiful" or the "Springfield Story"

The Searching for Daddy-one was just sooooo funny, I almost wet my pants about some of the posts there!!

I am a little sorry that the "Little Sister" thread stopped. I was enjoying that one very much. Same with the Daddy - daughter thread .. the nice one where she came home for dinner . taking her mom's place

I better not comment too much on the "naughty slave girl" for obvious reasons *weg*- but Shy Guy and Merelan - you both know that I am enjoying myself tremendously with that one *hugs for both of you*


Now - the "Orgy".. great fun!!!!!!!!!!really cool!!!! I enjoy each of the posts there. Although there is quite a few people involved we have somehow managed to keep track .. uhmmm almost actually .. Xander, is Cole still there??? *winks* and Roger .. please please keep it going!! you sure (well - both of you are!!) are an inspiration and challenge alike *lol*

A few of the other ones though .. well, there are a few "start up " posts for threads that are not really encouraging!! I wished people would realise that this is meant to be something like writing a "continuous story" ... so I am not really liking those "pick up" line starters .. I would have a hard time to develope a story and a post going from .. uhmmm .. nothing????? I really do not want to discourage anyone from starting a thread they would like to play ... but please please ... give it some more "flesh" than just one line.

OK - I know I should not be pointing my fingers on things I haven't done better myself yet .. but I have already an idea in mind I want to start here once I get more time and hope I am doing a good enough job to entice some people to write along *s*

Oh well - you better do not take me all that serious - I had a few drinks and it has been a looong day .. the key message though is:

I enjoy it a lot to participate in those RP's!1

 

[Xander]

Nicole, one thing I can say is. The show you and Ravenloft put on is extremely hot. Damn!!!!
Very Impressive.

I too am quite impressed by the imagination of everyone on the rpg threads. There are some ideas, twists and turns that I really like. Gives the whole thing another dimension.
I, for one is very happy to participate in it.

And Laurel. Always happy to bring joy to our beloved madam.

 

[ShyGuy68]

Nicole.

Say have you been reading my mind?? I have been thinking about this for the last few days myself. Because I too would like to get feedback on what I post here.

I do enjoy being a part of a few roleplays, and to read the others too. And I find that I sometimes have to think a hard about how to word my reply to the different roleplays I'm involved in.

And I have to say to all you people posting here, you're doing a great job!! At least in my humble opinion!


ShyGuy

PS. A little note to our beloved Madam. I'm thrilled to be interacting with you on the High School RPG!

 

[Nicole]

Well gee shuck's thank's guy's, ShyGuy I gave up mind reading when I took up being a mother, the two just don't mix.

Glad you all like the idea

Laurel I too am like you, couldn't stay away before, now I just seem to spend most of the day on here.

Xander, Umm... You like? Well gee thank's, I was a little aprehensive about writing you see, Someone kept asking so I eventually thought "What the hey" (Stop Laughing You two, you know who you are) and threw myself into it. I'm glad you are enjoying.

 

[ShyGuy68]

Nicole.

Phew good thing you can't read my mind, I was scared you had found out what I was thinking when I read what you write in the RP's!! http://geocities.com/r337m0nk3y/net/deg.gif


ShyGuy

 

[Ravenloft]

I don't know about the rest of you but that girl... Nicole... Good god! She turns me on! What a hot sexy thing she is! Its like she says hi and I get wood... You know? She says that guy... Jason I think... She says she likes it when he is all agressive... I am soooo jealous of that guy... Lucky fucker that he is! Grrrrrrr!

 

[Nicole]

ShyGuy that's what I want, tell me, tell me, tell me PLEEEEEEEEEASE

Now Now Ravenloft calm down, Leave Jason alone please...I mean he does the same to me too. Oh and Yes I do love that aggressive side...Keep it up babe...I love you

Hecate, well thanks very much for that, I like what you are writing too, as if you have been there and done that. So you think something is going on in real life hey?...Hmmmmmmm well, Our little secret okay

shhhhhh.

 

[Guest]

Hecate, mein liebchen, thankyou for that. =o) I just wanted to say that the scene going on down in the 'inner circle' between you & Nicole's beau, Ravenloft, is really dark and erotic (plenty hardcore action where it needs it, too, though - which is cool.). I like all the references to medieval German witchcraft & the mysterious potions Talea keeps producing. I'd maybe come down stairs to join you in the devilry but I've kinda got my hands tied (all 4 of them) up stairs at the orgy with Talea's Twin, the Mystery Man & my tattooed honey, Gabby. It's a long wild night, and I've got my fingers in way too many pies.

Poor Tara, though. It was her idea to have a fuck-fest in her favourite club, and somehow she's been left stranded in the corner - abandoned right on the point of climax. Which one of you gentlemen (or ladies?) is going to do the decent thing and put the poor girl out of her misery? She was gagging for it, the last I heard. (And, what happened to YOU, Xander? The woman was just about throwing herself at you, man.) I'd happily help out but I'd have to create a third character, and I might just go mad trying to keep track of all the twists and turns.

I've sent poor Earth Goddess... sorry, I mean GABRIELLA off to find some fresh meat, while RainDog takes a moment to catch his breath. I think the sexy little minx is a little shell-shocked after being made to strip in public & then perform leud lesbian acts with me on the dancefloor.

Meanwhile...

Looks like our man Jasdf is going to bring some slap-dick comedy to the proceedings when he returns, and good to see High Peaks juggling two characters at once. (Are Jack, Kate, Gabriella, Jasdf and RainDog about to get it on, I wonder? Looks like it's up to EarthGoddess or Jasdf to make the next move.)

And, who's this mysterious Courtesan who's just arrived at the door? I'm intrigued to see just who's got the nerve to try a witty one-liner on HER. Sounds like she could tear a man to shreds.

By the way - I'm sorry I've not been in to any of the other strands yet. This orgy seems to take up all my spare time. I'm sure I dreampt about it last night.

This new smutty board certainly puts Dungeons & Dragons in the shade, doesn't it?

Wonder if anyone'll stay stuck in character and have to be 'de-programmed' to prevent them going on a mad sex 'n' debauchery rampage.

(My name is Roger. I'm NOT a red-haired lesbian with pink pubes and a love of absynthe.)

Keep the juices flowing!

rog
xx

 

[Svedish_Chef]

I was too late for the Highschool reunion, but I am an avid reader and are loving it.. and thoroughly enjoyed Looking for daddy even if I only saw him twice, but I did have my first proper sex description that actually worked.... I thank the Georgeous lady involved, you know who you are...

It is fun, and once again "Do it for the madam!"

da Chef

 

[Guest]

"Orgy Fest": This role-playing is hard work, but great fun! All of your writing is excellent and a bit intimidating. I'm constantly trying to live up to you experienced participants. I hope I don't sound too much like a rube, even though I am.

Roger thanks for the encouragement for juggling two characters. I did that mostly to have a familiar face in the room. (lol) Being a "virgin" here makes me feel like a wallflower at a high school dance.

It is difficult to keep track of other people, so I have been copying pages just so I could reread them to remember who is with who, what are they wearing yada yada ….

Earthgoddess, thanks for sending the picture. That added a whole new 3rd dimension to your character. A lovely photo, provocative. It fires the imagination. Nice tattoo!

Hecate, the twins are fantastic! Great twist to the thread. I had no problem following who, where, what, when, because you handled the IC change very well.

It has been exciting checking the board every day to see what's happened. I'm a little sad when nothing new is added. How long do these threads last? Do they just kind of fizzle out due to lack of participation or do the writers have their characters leave? I was wondering what is considered polite role-play manners when winding up your character?

 

[Guest]

Hey, where do you think you're going, Peaks? The evening's still young. There's an orgy going on.

I didn't actually notice you were a virgin, which shows you must be a good writer. Have you submitted any fiction to Literotica? You should. Maybe even Jack 'n' Kate's own little story.

'Orgy Fest' is my first ever go at joining in with an online RPG. It's a lot of fun, and it's good motivation to keep writing regularly. I think I might mould some of my bits into short stories at some point in the future. Has anyone else thought of doing this? Or maybe even working on collaborations? eg - Hecate & Ravenloft could develop their 'Inner Circle' plotline into a hot little story that stands on its own.

rog

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[Guest]

I'm not leaving Rog, that was only a general rules of conduct question.

This may be your first online RPG but you certainly have a way of painting a verbal picture that indicates experience in writing. Praise from you is certainly appreciated.

I have submitted a story that has not been posted yet. I'm not sure how it will read. If it appears it should be "The Rescue" parts 1 and 2. I made a stab at some poetry a while ago that are still listed.

You should put together a story or just write a new one. I know I would read it!

HP

 

[Guest]

Originally posted by Hecate:
Uhhhmmm, just wondering - would it maybe be helpfull to have some kind of "How to Role Play (a guide to basically how to share the fun)"-thing??? Or is it only me being a bit picky??? *sighs* Could be - I guess I am taking things too serious at times *s* I mean I am not really Ms. Very Clever but if there was request I could try to share some of my (by now quite extended, although in non erotic fields mainly) knowledge about the subject RP.
Hecate

I would like a tutorial on Role-Playing. I'm not sure how to interact without being too aggressive. I don't want to get rejected even in role-play. Lol How pathetic is that? Heehee

 

[Savage Kitten]

Hey Rog *grins* thanks for rememberin my eternally lustful Tara *laffs* the poor thang....

actually I am very happy to have this Topic started .. it was an excellent idea!

I would like to apologise to everyone for 'abandoning' my post and my character that I created in "Orgy Fest" but as we all know there are only so many hours in the day and the few I have free I am trying to devote to my newest story that Whispersecret edited for me recently (you can only imagine how much work I have cut out for me haha) I tried to stay up with the threads but it only seemed to side track me from my story.. sooo... since Tara wasn't all too busy .. I checked out.. I do come back often though and read what everyone has written... its just too amazing.. i never dreamed i would have created such a monster with that topic hehe

and I love the "Reunion" one too... regret very much that I couldn't continue there.. but for the same reasons....

I hope ya'll understand.... maybe I'll get back soon ... am dyin to play some more *grinz*

 

[Hecate]

Ohh Savage Kitten ... how sad .. and I was just posting I was still keeping an eye and arm open for Tara at the orgy - at least I know now why I have been ignored *pout pout*

Just kidding - seriously !! Thanks for starting the thread!!! And I can very well relate to the side tracking in regards to story writing .. I used to write a lot .. and haven't written anything "of my own" since I started to RP here ...just never enough time for the good things *winks*

For all others I am currently playing with: Woohooo - great fun .. but please bear(is that a verb or only the big brown cuddly animal??) with me if I am sometimes a little slow in posting. Unfortunately I seem to be completely unable to make those nifty little posts that say it all in 10 lines :-( I always need half a page minimum ... but well - as long as nobody is throwing any stuff at me for being deadly boring and one big nuissance you will have to put up with me *g*

Geeze Roger - you sure have a wild imagination! Can I maybe hook you somehow on joining the "Inner Circle" and my Coven some time??? *winks*

High Peaks - you sure are doing a terriffic job specially if you never did it before!... hope you and I can find more threads to play together and you do not provide "both" parties for the fun *winks*

.. which is for you too, Earthgoddess *s* (and WOW ! I wished I had the guts to get such a tattoo .. uhmmm - would you mind letting me have a design of it if it exists? I think I am in love with it *blushing*)


As for the Naughty slave girl ... mmmhh ..... now that sure inspired my private intimate fantasies lately - thanks ShyGuy *hug* and special thanks to Merelan *hug*.

High school reunion: Still one of my favorits!!!!!! pity that Kristina and Nic disappeared sort of - and I would have liked to see the math teacher and the exchange student get a litle closer maybe .... but well - our love birds Nikki and Jason sure make up for it! Just as I was wondering if I should make some wicked interruption scene using those approaching footsteps you guys pull a poor innocent deer out of your sleeves *lol* .. keep it going - love it *s* Ohhh - and as for the secret of my last post on the feedback thread .. Nicole, I guess that is SOOOOO common knowledge by now anyway *lol* - nice though that I had a feel before I "knew" *winks* ... I just wonder if that aggressive side of Ravenloft you were asking for and that is displayed now on the "training" thread isn't a little more than what you have bargained for *just kidding* *hug* keep it up you two!!

As for some of the other threads ... uhmmmm ... I still do find only few appealing atm to be honest - and some straight scary! just not a lot I can identify with, but then again, I wouldn't have the time either right now

Plus I had to double check a few times when opening somw of the threads if I still was on the Role Play board ....(some sure had a tad too much serious discussion in them for my personal taste about topics I am not really feeling comfy with, but probably that is only me ... )


Uhhhmmm, just wondering - would it maybe be helpfull to have some kind of "How to Role Play (a guide to basically how to share the fun)"-thing??? Or is it only me being a bit picky??? *sighs* Could be - I guess I am taking things too serious at times *s* I mean I am not really Ms. Very Clever but if there was request I could try to share some of my (by now quite extended, although in non erotic fields mainly) knowledge about the subject RP.

*lol* ok ok - *ducks away from approaching thrown objects* ... I know I should better be posting instead of rambling here ... so off I go ... and I already posted on the "orgy" before rambling here

Hecate



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[Xander]

Oh Hecate. Nic's still around the reunion. I just had to think of some way to get him going after Krista left him *waaaaa*
But he's back with a vengance, and on stage no less.

 

[Hecate]

Xander - maybe I should pick up my initial idea of making a late entry? *winks* .. and what happened to Cole in the Orgy btw??

 

[Xander]

Hecate, I think Cole got drunk and passed out behind the bar. Missing all the action.

 

[Earthgoddess]

Hecate, thank you*blushes* I'll have hubby take a close up of tat and I'd be happy to try and do a tracing I'll let you know if it turns out...I wanna play pagan too..wwwaaaaa, I am a high priestess and nobody will play pagan with me wwwaaaa,I'd love to do a sexual magick rpg with you..hint hint

...
High Paeks get over here with both of your bad selves.
Roger you too...

 

[Savage Kitten]

Awwww Xander I am really sorry.. i was really getting into the char you created for Krista.. I had a feeling that their fantasy would have been so romantic and totally sizzzzzlin.... i look forward to playin with ya in the future *grinz*

 

[Xander]

Savage Kitten:
You're forgiven

Now let's play.

 

[Thumper]

Please accept my apologies for having to exit the Orgy Fest...due to circumstances beyond my control I will be detained elsewhere for the next couple of weeks.(see post in the Blurgh thread)...so I will be unable to keep up. Orgius interruptus I guess you could say...My apologies to you Courtesan for my hasty exit.
Have fun...

 

[Hecate]

Earthgoddess (and anyone else who might care) let me give away a little secret .. there are further plans for the "Inner Circle" in process atm. and I would be HONORED if my fellow pagan priestess would like to join *hug*
I will keep you informed if you like *s* ...

High Peaks - a little patience and I will try to write up a few basic "hints" I found to work .. and I will mail them to you if you like to give them a "pre-read" .. just be patient *S*


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