Feedback With Benefits? lol

[Megarae13]

Looking for feedback on my story, The Mentor. I've never written erotica before so this is really a first for me! I've got one chapter up and if you read mine and tell me what you think post your story here and I'll read it in turn (if you want me to.) Thanks so much! <3


http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-01

http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-02

http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-03

 

[sr71plt]

Looking for feedback on my story, The Mentor. I've never written erotica before so this is really a first for me! I've got one chapter up and if you read mine and tell me what you think post your story here and I'll read it in turn (if you want me to.) Thanks so much! <3

If you want folks to go read this, you should provide a link to it here.

 

[Deleted member 1178772]

If you want folks to go read this, you should provide a link to it here.

Agreed

 

[Megarae13]

Doh! My bad.

http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-01

 

[hottchic]

Doh! My bad.

http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-01

I came to this thread because I liked the way you had used the word 'Benefits' given my own post is called 'Tits Have Benefits' LOL

I did enjoy your story very much, I found it to be well written and you caught very well the emotions of the young woman. I gave your story 5*, so I am glad I checked out this post and followed your link

Now as promised you have to check out my story, 'Tits Have Benefits' under the post by that name LOL

 

[Megarae13]

Why of course I'll check your story out! (And I noticed that we both used the "benefits" in our titles! Unintentional on my part, it just shows great minds think alike ;-)

 

[Megarae13]

Second chapter of my story up!

 

[hottchic]

Second chapter of my story up!

And here is your link http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-02

People round here like life to be made easy for them, and people like me just like to be helpful LOL

 

[Megarae13]

I edited and posted the link for ch. 2 in the first post, but thanks ;-)

Link to Chapter three:

http://www.literotica.com/s/mentor-ch-03