Feedback welcomed - Elevator&Lace

[Blankito]

Hi All,

for some time now my girlfriend and I had these heated chats where one would start and the other would continue/play off the previously written and we would write pretty nice scenes. We discussed the possibility of turning these into stories. And we made our first attempt with the below ones.

We'd really appreciate Your comments, suggestions and constructive criticism on these, both in private messages or in the thread


https://www.literotica.com/s/elevator-and-lace
https://www.literotica.com/s/elevator-and-lace-pt-02


Thanks You

 

[robertreams]

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[Blankito]

robertreams : thank you for that they've been enabled