Feedback wanted

[canbgood]

I have posted my first four poems and was looking for some feedback on them.

 

[Natalie Nessus]

It's wise to post a link to the poems/stories

 

[Debbie]

Here's a link to your Bio

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=53086

 

[Rrrosyn]

I just thought I'd let you know, I rather enjoyed your poetry. Visual.

Poetry with format, yet you didn't get hammered into one style. Good for you.