Feedback requested to improve stories

[Eros Guru]

I've recently posted two stories: HOUSE WARMING GIFT (group sex) and LEARNING TO DANCE (lesbian). These are my first two stories, and I'd love to hear what others thought about them above and beyond the poll scoring.

Also, if anyone has the instructions to actually put a link for the stories here, I'd either A) appreciate if they did it in their post, or B) explained how to do it properly.

Thanks

 

[Debbie]

here's a link to your bio and stories

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=51287

 

[Guest]

I've read "Learning to Dance"... very nice piece of work! Especially since it doesn't lend to the cliche endings of most lesbian stories (well, from the one's I've read, anyway)...

Hope to see more of your work, Eros Guru!

Maintain and Check Six!

 

[Debbie]

I read 'Learning to dance' and found that the way the story it was written, the events unfolded with enough detail to make one imagine/visualise what was happening between the girls. It was not sleazy but made one feel that it was such a natural occurence. Very well written.

 

[Guest]

housewarming gift

Dear Eros;

I read housewarming gift and found it very entertaining. Keep up the good work