Feedback requested: My first published story!

[JohnRussell]

"For Services Rendered" (Mature section)

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=271337

I will reply to all signed feedback!
JohnRussell

 

[cawastedyouth]

Blown away...

And I'm not talking about a sexual act.

The sex scene in my mind is so real I could have been watching it on TV. Undoubtedly an enjoyable escape/fantasy story for me to read.

I hope you had as much fun writing it. Thank you for sharing your story.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Not sure what "signed" feedback is.

Yo, GREAT luck! The more of "us" that "make it", the more opportunities there are.

 

[JohnRussell]

Asylum, Wasted,

Thanks for the kind words! The overall feedback has been outrageously positive, so expect to see Chapter 2 coming soon!

Regards
JohnRussell