UnspunReality
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- Aug 8, 2009
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Umm, new author here and I've wanted to write for a long time. I love reading, have been using literotica for ages and ages and just recently decided to put forward my own work.
It falls under sci-fi and fantasy, and I can readily admit I love throwing myself into fantasy worlds. The tl;dr of the story is that our protagonist finds himself yanked off earth due to what he's dubbed The Passing. He's now on what could be seen as an Alternate Earth like world. The story is going to go through his journey on this world essentially.
Sorry about the long tl;dr. ._.
Anyway, a link to the first chapter is https://www.literotica.com/s/the-passing-ch-01
I've gotten a good rating and I have shared my story with some co-workers who have given me their own valuable feedback. But seeing as how this is my first shot at a story, I wanted to try and get... if not professional feedback, perhaps feedback that might be more, Im brain farting, but essentially feedback from other's who are used to being a critic and won't be nice to me for the sake of being nice.
Chapter 2 has already been submitted and I'm waiting for it to be posted but I'm just hoping for any words, bad or good on my story. I'm honestly having the most fun ive had in years with this and I just want to try and pass that feeling to others through my writing.
The story also has no real smut so far in either chapters, and has been more of a titillating thing. I do plan on including such scenes soon, but Im of the mindset that I shouldn't force what isn't there.
Anyway, I've rambled on and I apologize for making you read my ramblings here when I simply could have said Story, link, rate. Thank you to anyone who comments in advance!
It falls under sci-fi and fantasy, and I can readily admit I love throwing myself into fantasy worlds. The tl;dr of the story is that our protagonist finds himself yanked off earth due to what he's dubbed The Passing. He's now on what could be seen as an Alternate Earth like world. The story is going to go through his journey on this world essentially.
Sorry about the long tl;dr. ._.
Anyway, a link to the first chapter is https://www.literotica.com/s/the-passing-ch-01
I've gotten a good rating and I have shared my story with some co-workers who have given me their own valuable feedback. But seeing as how this is my first shot at a story, I wanted to try and get... if not professional feedback, perhaps feedback that might be more, Im brain farting, but essentially feedback from other's who are used to being a critic and won't be nice to me for the sake of being nice.
Chapter 2 has already been submitted and I'm waiting for it to be posted but I'm just hoping for any words, bad or good on my story. I'm honestly having the most fun ive had in years with this and I just want to try and pass that feeling to others through my writing.
The story also has no real smut so far in either chapters, and has been more of a titillating thing. I do plan on including such scenes soon, but Im of the mindset that I shouldn't force what isn't there.
Anyway, I've rambled on and I apologize for making you read my ramblings here when I simply could have said Story, link, rate. Thank you to anyone who comments in advance!
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