I'd appreciate feedback on my 2nd Literotica story, "Dancer in the Dark".
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=442551
Upon re-reading the story after it was posted, I've *now* discovered a typo introduced in the editing process. Sigh. Someday I'll manage to post a story typo free.
The audience that I write for is my wife, who also helped me to clean up the most egregious grammatical errors. I hope that some of you will enjoy it as well.
All suggestions for improvement are welcomed. Although I've been an avid 'reader' my entire life, these are my first wanderings into the world of the 'writer'; and I've found it both easier and more difficult then I imagined it would be. Here's to those of you that make it look easy!
-Zot
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=442551
Upon re-reading the story after it was posted, I've *now* discovered a typo introduced in the editing process. Sigh. Someday I'll manage to post a story typo free.
The audience that I write for is my wife, who also helped me to clean up the most egregious grammatical errors. I hope that some of you will enjoy it as well.
All suggestions for improvement are welcomed. Although I've been an avid 'reader' my entire life, these are my first wanderings into the world of the 'writer'; and I've found it both easier and more difficult then I imagined it would be. Here's to those of you that make it look easy!
-Zot
