Feedback request for "1985 Phone Booth Blowjob"

[JDSavanyu]

I'd like some feedback for my story "1985 Phone Booth Blowjob." One of my curiosity pieces for fans of vintage pre-internet porn, and anyone from Richmond, Virginia who remembers the glory days of the West Grace Street party zone near VCU.

 

[ICantLeafYou]

It would help if you posted a link to the story, or even your author profile. I don't know how to actually get to an author profile from the forum side of the site, so I just went to my own author page and inserted your username in the URL instead to find it.