Feedback request: A Death, Baked Bob, and the Personal Ad

[Rogue Writer]

Looking for a little feedback on my story A Death, Baked Bob and the Personal Ad (F/F) (1/4). Here is a link-

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=183717

email is roguewriter@hotmail.com

Thanks to Kvngllghr8 for letting me know about this forum.

RW

 

[darkgoddess2478]

When I first read the title of this story, I was really surprised. It intrigued me enough to actually sit down and read.

I am glad that I did. I am looking forward to the sequal.

The story flowed very well. I was impressed with the layout of the story and the way you dropped little hints to future events...

I got lost in the story. *grins* And I rated you accordingly.

 

[Rogue Writer]

Thanks!

darkgoddess2478,

Thank you for your feedback! I'll have part 2 posted in the next few days. Hope to hear your comments on it.

RW