FEEDBACK REALLY HELPS

[Guest]

I am in the same boat as jenne64. My first attempt at writing (cute lil alli)was posted today and i would appreciate all feedback. positive or negative doesn't matter, it all helps. I have some great incest stories i would like to submit. Some fantasy and some factual, i'll let you decide what is what.

 

[Rodrigo]

I wrote a story and then asked for feedback and didn't get much, so today I'm going to give feedback to anybody that wants it. Okay, Buck, I just read your story and thought that it moved a little too quickly. I would like to have seen Alli seduced a little longer. Also, your story contained no dialogue. I think some actual dialogue would have drawn me in a little more. The sex scenes were pretty good, so overall I think you could use a little practice, I'm into incest stories, so good luck with them. Good luck.