Feedback please

[christcat69]

Leo Moon Silent Predator

I need some feedback so please either go vote or post here. I beg of you.

 

[WickedEve]

In Leo Moom (good title) succombing should be succumbing.

The poems are similar, and both are good. There isn't anything that jumped out at me that I would change.

 

[christcat69]

Hi again Eve

Hello Eve!
I'm glad you replied. I am aware of the misspelling in Leo Moon so can I re-submit it? I love when you comment on my writings because you are so honest. Thanks for the feedback Eve. Love ya.