Feedback Please!

[KissingDragons]

I have posted two poems and have gotten only one rating per and no feed back I really want to know what you think of these.

The poems are "His Hands". And "Dream Lover"

http://www.literotica.com/p/his-hands-7

http://www.literotica.com/p/dream-lover-125

Please tell me if I'm on the right track here.

Thanks, KissingDragons

 

[butters]

welcome to the forum, kissingdragon.

in a couple of days i will have a bit more time, but i did read through and left one rating.

as a newcomer, your best way to gather views/votes is to get to know others here and, more specifically, visit other people's writing and leave your own comments/ratings. so many new people just come, drop material, and wait. it's a two-way street, kd - put yourself about a bit