Feedback please

[thechangedone]

Hello,

Once my first story is published, I will greatly appreciate all the feedback I can get!

Thanks!

 

[estragon]

First Catch Your Rabbit

Best to post request for feedback with a link to the published story for which you request feedback. There are those who will not hunt out your masterpiece or remember your name. Remember, if you want someone to do something, make it easy for them to do it. Even better, make it easy for them to do it straight away, before they think of something easier to do straight away.

 

[LordOfHell]

Completely off-topic:

Is your name "The Changed One" or "The Change Done"?