lickmybananabread
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- Sep 15, 2008
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Hi, I'm not usually the type of person who attempts to shamelessly plug their stories. However, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticisms about where I am now, as an author.
This is completely fictional and based around the English celebrity 'Cheryl Cole', and is my newest story:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=395835
Urm, basically just read it and tell me what you think about it. I would really appreciate any words you have to say, good or bad, about it!
Thanks, ~
This is completely fictional and based around the English celebrity 'Cheryl Cole', and is my newest story:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=395835
Urm, basically just read it and tell me what you think about it. I would really appreciate any words you have to say, good or bad, about it!
Thanks, ~
