Feedback please

[woodnymph_O]

just got accepted on new story. Yes I am looking for feedback, not just promoting myself. This kind of situation in writing is new to me and I need an honest opinion or two. It would be the valentine link in my sig line. To be honest I'm not sure if it made it into the V-day contest or not.
Hugs and thanks in advance
Nymphy
PS remember Opinions are indead like assholes, lovingly accepted when offered

 

[woodnymph_O]

Ok just found the feedback forum

Sorry Ill go over there and be quiet now
Nymphy

 

[logophile]

I'm assuming that it's your Valentine's entry that you want feedback on? If so, you can also post in the Valentine's Contest thread. Everyone there is ready to help!

Anyway, I read the story. Very very hot! There were a few typos, but I can tell you from experience that the readers don't seem to mind that! Your content was great. There will always those who want more plot but I personally love what you wrote and how you wrote it. Good luck with it!

 

[woodnymph_O]

I'm assuming that it's your Valentine's entry that you want feedback on? If so, you can also post in the Valentine's Contest thread. Everyone there is ready to help!

Anyway, I read the story. Very very hot! There were a few typos, but I can tell you from experience that the readers don't seem to mind that! Your content was great. There will always those who want more plot but I personally love what you wrote and how you wrote it. Good luck with it!

AWW thank you
Hug hug hug
Nymphy

 

[cantdog]

So brief!

I told you to write more stories, nymphy. This is what you should be doing.

cantdog

 

[impressive]

Hot stuff! I think you might get spanked for miscategorization, though. IMO, it belongs in Lesbian Sex -- even though it appears that subsequent stories might be M/F.

Be careful with overuse of certain adjectives ("tight little hole" springs to mind). It wasn't a turn off -- but I was aware of it.

Anyway, RVC'd on the turn on factor -- and the fact that I want more.

 

[Lisa Denton]

I liked it and I'm sure Marge did also, he, he. On the next one I think you should describe her a little more, or maybe you wanted me to imagine her which I did. I gave you a 5. See ya.

 

[eric shawn listo]

Great story, Nymphy. You had me from "stroke that big dick for me and I'll tell you all about it". You held onto the theme that you were telling him about it nicely. Super job!

eric

 

[carsonshepherd]

Yummy! I voted you a 5 becuase this is a really sizzling little story. Good use of images here, not much that could be better.

 

[woodnymph_O]

OMG you guys have been so sweet

I have the sniffles this morning.
thank you for all the feedback on the points for me to work on. I am taking every one of these to heart.

Cantdog I appreciate so much you saying that I should be writing. Your sweet comment comes to mind each time I doubt myself.

Impressive I have done a re-read and now I'm aware too, but thank you for stil being so complimentary. The catagory was really a toss up, but in the end I asked laurel to try to find the bast spot to keep part two and three with the first. I didn't want anyone to have to search for them. But I'm still figuring all this out

Lisa , you caught on to that most perfectly, the point of my story was to get some immagination working. In the future I will try to give some more detail, but I'm glad you picked up on that.I am so happy that you enjoyed it. This was my FIRST EVER lesbian type scene, and I have been so nervous, especially since I have read a couple of yours lol. HUG

Eric thanks alot and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Carson thank you for the vote and the feedback. I can't wait to get back to work again.

It's been kind of hard for me to make my second submission because my first went well and I was afraid to fail. I think I'll be ok from now on
thanks for all the help and support
Nymphy

 

[carsonshepherd]

Re: OMG you guys have been so sweet

It's been kind of hard for me to make my second submission because my first went well and I was afraid to fail. I think I'll be ok from now on
thanks for all the help and support
Nymphy


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But, since your own feelings about the story are most important, as long as you're happy with it you can't fail!

 

[woodnymph_O]

Re: Re: OMG you guys have been so sweet

But, since your own feelings about the story are most important, as long as you're happy with it you can't fail!

You are so right! Thanks for reminding me of that.
Tons of hugs
Nymphy

 

[LadyJeanne]

Re: OMG you guys have been so sweet

It's been kind of hard for me to make my second submission because my first went well and I was afraid to fail.

Does anyone else get just the teeniest bit turned on when there's talk of submission? No? K, I'll go back to reading now...

 

[woodnymph_O]

Re: Re: OMG you guys have been so sweet

Does anyone else get just the teeniest bit turned on when there's talk of submission? No? K, I'll go back to reading now...

I Know , I keep clicking my view submissions button , but I think it may be broke. All I ever see are words

Nymphy