Feedback please: Tantalising Tanya Ch03

[fuzzie_writer]

Hi all,

I've been writing for awhile now, but have only recently started to become active (and by active, I mean still predominantly lurking) on the forums. I'd be interested to get some feedback on my latest story; its the third part of possibly four or five, although there's no need to have read the other two!

Also, it is in the CD / TS section, just in case that doesn't float your boat!

http://www.literotica.com/s/tantalising-tanya-ch-03

Thanks in advance!

 

[SofiaWife]

Hi all,

I've been writing for awhile now, but have only recently started to become active (and by active, I mean still predominantly lurking) on the forums. I'd be interested to get some feedback on my latest story; its the third part of possibly four or five, although there's no need to have read the other two!

Also, it is in the CD / TS section, just in case that doesn't float your boat!

http://www.literotica.com/s/tantalising-tanya-ch-03

Thanks in advance!

I thought it was quite good .

 

[fuzzie_writer]

I thought it was quite good .

Thanks for reading Sofia, and I'm glad you enjoyed it

 

[nudityman]

I liked it too, keep it up