Feedback Please on Vampire Story

TalyisBagley

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Hello
I would love feedback on my vampire series. I usually get feedback from the readers but my last posts are coming of niche. I am wondering if I am doing something wrong. Please take a look at my series "Of Thorns and Pearls"

It is about a young NY artist who meets a vampire who tells her she is more than she thinks she is.

Chapter 5 of my vampire series was posted today.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=448813

Thank you so much.
 
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