Feedback on story - First Date

[RKB_Kirin]

I've posted my first story here on Literortica and I thought it would be helpful to get some feedback on it. (I appreciate the kind comments so far!)

It is a short about a guy's first date with a succubus. It is erotic horror mixed with humor.

https://www.literotica.com/s/first-date-79

Main tags - succubus – romance – transformation – public nudity

Thanks!