I'm attempting to make a living as a professional erotica writer, and I would love any feedback the kind folks at Lit could give me. 
. I think I've got most of the grammatical oopsies and awkward sentences or phrases catalogued for a future revising, but you never know....
This story has elements of: the supernatural, incest: daddy-daughter, grandmother-granddaughter, futanari, and psychic possession.
http://www.literotica.com/s/daddys-little-succubus-vol-01
. I think I've got most of the grammatical oopsies and awkward sentences or phrases catalogued for a future revising, but you never know....This story has elements of: the supernatural, incest: daddy-daughter, grandmother-granddaughter, futanari, and psychic possession.
http://www.literotica.com/s/daddys-little-succubus-vol-01
