ChuckandAndrea
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https://www.literotica.com/s/tandl-01-rules-arent-to-be-broken
This is my first go at things. Wrote a big long (to my standards) story over the course of a few days. Spent another couple of days editing. I could have, and probably should have done more, but I was curious to get 'expert' feedback from people who read stuff like this regularly.
I've been writing stories for a while, but usually just dumped a first draft, quick edited for obvious grammar etc, and gave it to my wife cause she likes to read 'em. It's always been just for us, but my wife encouraged me to 'put something out there' and see if anyone likes it.
Also, I almost exclusively write about real experiences my wife and I have had, while exploring our fantasies with bits of fiction here and there. This is my first attempt at pure fiction - characters pulled from thin air, experiences I've never had, and situations that are what I consider to be at the extreme edge of believability (though I know that line gets crossed here and there).
This is part 1 of 4. I submitted all four parts at the same time so we'll see when the others pop up - I'll add links in this thread. Hopefully they publish in order otherwise that's awkward. Lesson learned either way, definitely going to space them out to guarantee that doesn't happen in the future. I will also try to spend more time writing and editing to improve on things based on the feedback i receive. Comments on the story itself have already given me some ideas of what I need to improve upon.
Thanks in advance!
This is my first go at things. Wrote a big long (to my standards) story over the course of a few days. Spent another couple of days editing. I could have, and probably should have done more, but I was curious to get 'expert' feedback from people who read stuff like this regularly.
I've been writing stories for a while, but usually just dumped a first draft, quick edited for obvious grammar etc, and gave it to my wife cause she likes to read 'em. It's always been just for us, but my wife encouraged me to 'put something out there' and see if anyone likes it.
Also, I almost exclusively write about real experiences my wife and I have had, while exploring our fantasies with bits of fiction here and there. This is my first attempt at pure fiction - characters pulled from thin air, experiences I've never had, and situations that are what I consider to be at the extreme edge of believability (though I know that line gets crossed here and there).
This is part 1 of 4. I submitted all four parts at the same time so we'll see when the others pop up - I'll add links in this thread. Hopefully they publish in order otherwise that's awkward. Lesson learned either way, definitely going to space them out to guarantee that doesn't happen in the future. I will also try to spend more time writing and editing to improve on things based on the feedback i receive. Comments on the story itself have already given me some ideas of what I need to improve upon.
Thanks in advance!