Feedback on my first story!

momandme

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Hi
I've submitted my first story "For Her Husband's Sake"( The link is http://www.literotica.com/s/for-her-husbands-sake), an incest story, and I would really appreciate your constructive criticism and feedback. If you like it, do show your appreciation in the voting and comments section :)
I'm working on another installment of the story, so please feel free to chip in with suggestions.
 
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