Feedback on my first story? I know its terrible but im a new writer.

[sanskrit120]

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[MyRubiLips]

Any reason you're copy/pasting this into more than one thread?

 

[Desiremakesmeweak]

It isn't terrible at all.

Keep going pal.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Stories are submitted over on the story side of the sight, not here in the forums.

Go here...Stories & Pics.

You might have to create another user account, but try logging in at the top with your forum ID.

Clicking on you login name will take you to your author account where you submit your stories.

Good luck.