Feedback on my first cheating wife poem

[1950scuckold]

I just got my two first poems published here and I'd appreciate some feedback. The one I'm most happy with is this one narrated by a sadistic cheating wife who propositions another man to cuckold her husband:

https://www.literotica.com/p/a-stronger-man-to-fuck-my-butt

 

[UnderYourSpell]

The best way to get feedback is to read other people's poems and comment, and to join in this forum's activities so people know who you are and what sort of work you put out.