Feedback on Ex/Voyeur story? Please?

[Toqueme]

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[OnnaDare]

Was this the first story you've posted to Lit? If so, congratulations! You're a very good writer.
Now, a quick question for you. Is it easier for you to write in 1st person, or not? I find it difficult, but your story has inspired me to try. Thank you again!
I've got one story on, and one pending...If you give me a read, I'd love to hear your opinions!
Onna

 

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