Feedback for Virgin Summer

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I would like some feedback, for my story, Virgin Summer, and some ideas and suggestions for where it could go next, as I need some new ideas for it.

 

[damppanties]

the links

You'd be better off with a link when asking for feedback and comments. Here are the links -

Virgin Summer.
Virgin Summer Ch. 02
Virgin Summer Ch. 03
Virgin Summer Ch. 04