Feedback for ONE LAST HOPE

[chewbacca71]

Since I started the one man thread...ONE LAST HOPE, I have received some encouraging pms from people. I really appreciate them. I would ask for one favor from people. If you read the thread , let me know what you think. If you like it, let me know, tell me what works - what you like about it. If you did not like it , tell me it sucks and what did not work. I am seriously considering making more out of this in the future and would love any feedback, positive or negative. Thanks in advance.

John

 

[chewbacca71]

It was suggested that I put a link to the thread so here it is....

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=226353

 

[Evil Attorney]

From what I read on page 1, I think it is well written.

I like you use of detail in the story and it flows nicely.