Feedback for my first audio story

[Trovan]

Hi everyone,

Just published my first audio on Literotica and would love some feedback.

The Jazz Dream – An Encounter in the Betwixed Realm [M4F]

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-jazz-dream

Curious about:
• voice pacing
• atmosphere
• immersion

Text version if curious.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-tantric-encounter

Thanks!