Feedback for first effort?

[CarlusMagnus]

Have you ever noticed that most non-anonymous comments come from non-authors?

I'd be grateful for comments, from folks who've been there, on my first story, which is a seven-part series---"Charlie and Mindy".

It's an incest romance in the Incest/Taboo category, and you can find the first chapter at

http://www.literotica.com/s/charlie-and-mindy-bk-01-ch-01.

To get following chapters, follow Literotica's links or change the last digit in the URL to the appropriate number from 2 through 7.

I'm particularly interested in comments that address individual chapters in the context of all seven, but all constructive comments are welcome.

Thanks,

--CarlusMagnus