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My first LW story:

Range Cold

I'll be honest, this story has gotten plenty of positive reception, and a nice shiny H so I'm only asking for more eyes on it, because I'm so proud of it [feel free to punish me for my hubris].

I'm already planning an edit to add in a missing line and fix a few small errors. Any other ideas that might help perfect the edit would be certainly considered and appreciated.

Thank you.
 
Like this comment if you want OP to stop gloating and write another story.

Hell if I got a red H AND 148 comments in five days, in LW, you couldn't shut me up about it. Especially as a first story. Let them strut around a while. Well done. I'll check it out later.
 
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