Feedback for A Trample Party (all parts)

[TeroWright]

Since it was mentioned in another post, here is the feedback thread for 'A Trample Party', the follow-up to 'Christie and Cindy's Intro'. Again, for those who haven't read it yet, it is a trample / foot fetish story told in 1st person just like its predecessor.

It introduces four friends who share Christie's interest in platonic, yet edgy trampling, and come with their own quirks that set them a part from each other. In time, each of them will have their own stories that will flesh out their personalities, but they do have some similarities in attitude, which is why they are Christie's friends.

Since this was written around the same time as the first story, I'm not expecting much feedback in punctuation and word usage. I think this time I'd like some thoughts on the interactions of the ladies, and how good or bad the story is told through a limited set of eyes that 1st person offers. I've vaguely heard that 1st person is hard to do right (even though everyone has their own idea of what 'right' is), and being a novice writer, I still don't have a solid grasp of where I place on the board for doing it right or wrong - which is why I'm here.

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-trample-party-pt-01

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-trample-party-pt-02

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-trample-party-pt-03

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-trample-party-pt-04-finale

 

[Tabithablack]

I had never heard of trampling, so I went and looked for trampling videos on porn hub...one...its strangely hot, but more so that is one of the few porn fetishes where I hope the guy is getting paid more than the women because he's earning it.

 

[TeroWright]

@Tabithablack - In most cases, the guys "payment" is simply being walked on by the women. I've never heard of a guy being paid more, if he gets paid at all through some variant of currency. I do agree that many guys put up with quite a lot and should 'earn' equally as much, but the fetish in general is usually about degrading them and treating them like crap - which I'm not a fan of and hence why my stories exist.

 

[Tabithablack]

@Tabithablack - In most cases, the guys "payment" is simply being walked on by the women. I've never heard of a guy being paid more, if he gets paid at all through some variant of currency. I do agree that many guys put up with quite a lot and should 'earn' equally as much, but the fetish in general is usually about degrading them and treating them like crap - which I'm not a fan of and hence why my stories exist.

So you're saying the guys in those types of videos actually like it? I assumed they were just getting paid to go through with it. Guess I'm rusty on my porn industry knowledge

I did have a boyfriend though who had a thing for 'stinky feet." I used to be a long distance runner and when I ran in the summer he'd want me to take off my socks and rub my sweaty feet all over his face, and call him a loser...so I guess I shouldn't be surprised.

 

[TeroWright]

So you're saying the guys in those types of videos actually like it? I assumed they were just getting paid to go through with it. Guess I'm rusty on my porn industry knowledge

I did have a boyfriend though who had a thing for 'stinky feet." I used to be a long distance runner and when I ran in the summer he'd want me to take off my socks and rub my sweaty feet all over his face, and call him a loser...so I guess I shouldn't be surprised.

Well, I can't speak for ALL trample videos, but in most cases, yeah, the guy actually likes it (which is why the video is done in the first place) and the girl(s) don't. And it doesn't surprise me about your boyfriend, liking stinky feet and all. I personally don't get the attraction to the smell, but I'd imagine yours were soft too, so I'd give him that at least. To be fair though, some smells aren't too bad. Either way, to each their own.