Feedback Exchange

[havsumfun1]

Hey, I'm interested in getting feedback on my story and giving feedback on your stories. This is my first, it's called The Lady Cop at:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-lady-cop

Thanks in advance and I look forward to reading your stuff!

havsumfun1

 

[kromen]

Read, voted, and commented. Can you do me a favor and take a look at Liquid Bullets? It's in my signature line. Thanks, and look forward to reading more from you.

 

[havsumfun1]

Thanks Kromen! I liked Liquid Bullets, wouldn't let me post my comment but I'm going back to try again, it may have to be as Anonymous. Definitely be reading more of your stories!

 

[Lucky3]

Read the story and thouroughly enjoyed!

I posted my first story a week or so ago and would love to know if it is worth adding more.......allready on chapter 2

 

[havsumfun1]

Thanks Lucky! I read and commented on your story, keep at it!

 

[JulieBlueBelle]

I read your story, I thought it was pretty good. It was much easier to read than many that I've seen here because there were only a couple of mistakes as opposed to the numerous glaring ones I usually see.

I have my first story up here as well. It's just the first chapter, though, so much of it is given to back story. Tell me what you think, anyway, and the second chapter should be up in a few days. It's still pending at the moment, but I think it's much better than the first.

Thanks a bunch.

 

[havsumfun1]

Thanks Julie, I know what you mean, proofreading is really important. I liked your story and left a comment, please let me know when the next chapter's up.

By coincidence, the story I have pending features a redhead, I promise I didn't steal her from you!