Feedback desired

[sugardaddy]

I have received the odd feedback letter off and on. If anyone is interested in posting or pming me feedback i would appreciate it. The link below is to my stories. I have written over a wider subject area.


http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=86741

Thanks!
Sugardaddy

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I looked at "Gambling My Daughter" Part 1, then saw that it involved a golden shower, which is not my thing at all, so I'll recuse myself from commenting.

The one thing that I did see that struck me as odd was the fact that you start out talking about sex with your daughter in First Person ('I/she'), then after a couple of paragraphs you suddenly switch to Second Person ('I/you') with no explanation.

Anyhow, I'll have to kleave it for someone else to give you more complete feedback.

---dr.M.