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[Rodrigo]

Hey everybody, the good people here at literotica were kind enough to post my story, it's caled "Jessica," and it's an incest story. Seeing as this is my first stab at erotica, I was hoping I could get some tips: things you liked, things you hated, you know, tips. I've been writing forever, but erotica is a whole nother planet. I just re-read the story myself, and I don't know what to make of it. Any tips, thoughts and or comments would be appreciated. Thanks.

 

[Hullo_nurse]

Rodrigo--Great story!! I really liked it. Keep UP the good work

 

[Shintani]

Hey, I thought it was a damned good story! I'm considering submitting a few of my own to the site, did it take them long to get yours listed?

 

[Rodrigo]

Thanks for the kind words. Also, Shintani, it took about ten days for my stories to get posted. Thanks again.