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Feedback appreciated

Thread starter Sarah Davies
Start date Sep 16, 2006

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Sarah Davies

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Sep 16, 2006

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I would appreciate some feedback on my poem please.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=275328

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