Feedback? and shameless plug

[Softouch911]

Shameless plug and feedback needed

I’m starting this thread to ask people in the lifestyle to please read the first chapter of what I hope will become a BDSM romance novel. I’m writing this novel with my submissive, Pita. (She is the one who suggested I start a thread and solicit opinions.)

The question is this -- we all know there is a HUGE market for Romance; and there's also one for BDSM and D/s, though smaller. Is there one for a hybrid that puts them together? We have a lot of experience as writers, but this is something pretty new ....

Better yet, do you think we're making a start that will tap such a market?

Positive votes and comments are welcomed of course, but we also welcome all criticism. Pita and I want the story to be something that our community can relate to. Did we strike a chord?

The link is in my sig., or hers.

TIA!

ST

 

[BeachGurl2]

Very good read. I'll be looking for chapter 2.

Note to pita: I'm very happy for you, sweetie.

 

[His_pita]

Very good read. I'll be looking for chapter 2.

Note to pita: I'm very happy for you, sweetie.

Thank you girlie! I'm very happy for me too.

Thanks so much for reading the first chapter. I promise much more action to come in chapter two.

I really hope more people will read it and please vote and leave a comment. If you like romance with an edge to it then I know you will like my Joe's story, "Owning Pita"

 

[Softouch911]

I was just reminded of the "Shameless Plug" thread

Apologies for the brain cramp!

ST