rfriverrat
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I'd appreciate any feedback you care to provide for my story, "Raped at Work". I've got a few threads that dead end and am working on trying to tie them all together, but its going slow.
I've been working on it, only sporatically for more than a year and would like some help expanding the story and seeing where we can go with it. Your feedback would be appreciated.
I'd also welcome any other authors contributions, if you feel inclined to add to it.
Thanks in advance for your thoughts and feedback.
Have a great weekend, everyone.
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/3966
I've been working on it, only sporatically for more than a year and would like some help expanding the story and seeing where we can go with it. Your feedback would be appreciated.
I'd also welcome any other authors contributions, if you feel inclined to add to it.
Thanks in advance for your thoughts and feedback.
Have a great weekend, everyone.
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/3966
