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[darkoverlord6]

Hey Folks,

I've been trying to break into the Sci-Fi/Fantasy category with some stories I consider a nod to the old Twilight Zone/Outer Limits T.V. shows. I think of them as romantic science-fiction stories with more of an emphasis on characters than world-building. If you have a chance please let me know what you think.

https://www.literotica.com/s/its-only-the-rain

https://www.literotica.com/s/last-one-out-of-eden

 

[RandyD1369]

Hey Folks,

I've been trying to break into the Sci-Fi/Fantasy category with some stories I consider a nod to the old Twilight Zone/Outer Limits T.V. shows. I think of them as romantic science-fiction stories with more of an emphasis on characters than world-building. If you have a chance please let me know what you think.

https://www.literotica.com/s/its-only-the-rain

https://www.literotica.com/s/last-one-out-of-eden

I just read It's Only the Rain. Outstanding story telling. Excellent characterizations. I left a comment and Five starred it. L. M. Bujold or J. D. MacDonald couldn't have done it better. I'll check out your other stuff as well. Thanks.

 

[Jada59]

I read the first one. It's well written but too long for my taste. I may be in the minority though. My stories are too short for some people.

 

[RandyD1369]

Okay. I've read Last One Out of Eden. Amazingly good characters.