February Poetry Contest Finals

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February Literotica Poetry Contest Finals

The final voting stage will be closed exclusively to the 24 participating poets, and done via PM to The Poetry Contest.

Please select only one of these six poems as your favourite. No self-votes will be admited, of course, and all the PMs will have to come in before midnight GMT (7 PM Eastern) on Tuesday, March 1.


After the three semi-final polls were closed, the following 6 poems top-voted poems were selected to the final (one tie-break was necessary. the two poems were judged by The Poetry Contest - That particular vote was 2-0, making the third vote unnecessary):





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poem # 4

The Glow Of Fates

Even in the midst
of an August illusion,
aurora borealis out of sight,
zenith far away,

it is easy to forget
that each particle
I blow from between fingers
contains a promise.

We might live another day,
another hour here,
another year.

Can you see what I see,
my love? The micro spectacle
ahead, possibilities piled
in my palm. The glow
of fates intersected,
right there.

We must carry with each step,
humbly this gift.

Sow what we can,
and reap no other reward
than to witness the marvel
of growth.


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poem # 6

Silent Sophie

She was the round head
in a uneven world.

Grotesgue
sculpture....

minx a fantasy field,
dyed in a summer heat.

Crying out in silence,
I left her that way.



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poem # 10

Empty Hands

For empty hands once flowers grew
To paint small fingers in pastels
As chalk dust prints appeared on veils
And watercolor stained a robe
It washes out, yet still remains

A hint of sun that fades at night.
As petals tumble to hillsides
Small artist on their palettes nod
And dream of blossom’s fleeting hues
As they trickle though empty hands.



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poem # 11

Restoration

Pale pieces of me faded
into an empty landscape
until I closed my eyes.

Over black his voice painted
fresh vision from a palette
of shared memories. Blue eyes

blended with green to see
the sunberry smear juicy
kisses across the sky, sticking

the clouds to the horizon.
Our fingers filtered dripping
rays that dyed my dress

a deeper red. And in the mossy
damp we bathed our feet
in blossom bubbles that floated

on the breeze. The wind is blue
today he whispered and placed
a flower in my hand.

Open your eyes and see.



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poem # 18

Blue Dream Daisy

Gaze upon the coloured
landscape which nature
has blossomed
right in front
of your monochromatic eyes.

Fall back amidst
the gentle-scented loveliness
that spring
has graciously brushed
warmly against
your pink pastel cheeks.

A flower can never rise
above the lofty height
of a tender stem
but innocent imagination
lifts them, fluttering
free, like butterflies
intent on petalled beds.

Sleep on this breeze
softened evening
and sigh upon the shoulder
of this daisy
scented dream.



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poem # 24

Red Sky at Morning

Here is sunlight,
red sky at morning, and I
take no warning but bend
my head intoxicated
by fields of flowers
dipped blue as sapphire seeds.
Here the canary sunlight

is God who made me
beautiful and ugly, God
who gave me an intaglio
of red sky gleaming past
the wake of dawn, fallen
as prisms to my hair, why
is my heart misshapen?

My monstrous limbs
which should blossom among
the heliotrope and lupine,
are swollen with the half-life
of memory. I limp insufficiency

and God when I fall,
the strongest arms to catch me,
the warmest hands to hold me
aren’t Yours, but a man’s
whose name the flowers whisper.
 
got it, blue.

please do not cast your votes on the thread.

PM them to The Poetry Contest.

:rose:
 
oops!

PatCarrington said:
got it, blue.

please do not cast your votes on the thread.

PM them to The Poetry Contest.

:rose:
:confused:
I realized I clicked the wrong link after the fact...so I posted in right place...its monday...I still need more coffee...####
 
bluerains said:
:confused:


me confused too. it says voting exclusivley closed to the 24 poets, etc, etc...does this mean, that even though I voted in the primary, I cannot vote in the real deal? thats turrible, turrible, I say ;) cause I like sophie too
 
The Poetry Contest said:
February Literotica Poetry Contest Finals

The final voting stage will be closed exclusively to the 24 participating poets, and done via PM to The Poetry Contest.



took the words out of my mouth Maria, but I won't say what poem I would be voting for :nana:
 
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echoes_s said:
took the words out of my mouth Maria, but I won't say what poem I would be voting for :nana:

Maria2394 said:
bluerains said:
:confused:


me confused too. it says voting exclusivley closed to the 24 poets, etc, etc...does this mean, that even though I voted in the primary, I cannot vote in the real deal? thats turrible, turrible, I say ;) cause I like sophie too


sorry ladies.

those were the rules for the first contest in january, and we just carried them over into this month's contest. :)

hint hint: if you enter a poem next month, you'll be able to vote in the finals.

and i, for one, love the poetry both of you produce. ;)

:rose:
 
Maria2394 said:
bluerains said:
:confused:


me confused too. it says voting exclusivley closed to the 24 poets, etc, etc...does this mean, that even though I voted in the primary, I cannot vote in the real deal? thats turrible, turrible, I say ;) cause I like sophie too

I made the same mistake, and thought non- participants were to vote. lol

Now I just have to wait. *sigh
 
BooMerengue said:
Maria2394 said:
I made the same mistake, and thought non- participants were to vote. lol

Now I just have to wait. *sigh

.......wait for the next contest, so you can enter.

that's what you meant of course, right Boo. :)

:rose:
 
PatCarrington said:
BooMerengue said:
.......wait for the next contest, so you can enter.

that's what you meant of course, right Boo. :)

:rose:

lol

No, Pat! Not exactly! I meant I have to wait and see (hope) everyone votes for the one I like!

I don't see me entering this contest, though I DO love to see the results. I prefer the simpler challenges where everyone wins!
 
BooMerengue said:
PatCarrington said:
lol

No, Pat! Not exactly! I meant I have to wait and see (hope) everyone votes for the one I like!

I don't see me entering this contest, though I DO love to see the results. I prefer the simpler challenges where everyone wins!


awwww c'mon, Boo. give it a shot.

who cares about votes?

and i'll vote for you.....i'll read all your poetry and figure out which one is yours. :D

:rose:
 
PatCarrington said:
BooMerengue said:
awwww c'mon, Boo. give it a shot.

who cares about votes?

and i'll vote for you.....i'll read all your poetry and figure out which one is yours. :D

:rose:

Well, darling... start another thread, give us another Same Title Challenge, and a due date (not too long... these tend to get written quickly and folks want to see results quickly) and we'll see.

I don't think votes matter, nor do I think does anonymity. I think instruction and constructive criticism is what its about. I treat Lit more as a place to learn and grow, rather than to shine. I want to learn here, and then if I do good, send my baby somewhere else to be born. Does that make sense?
 
BooMerengue said:
PatCarrington said:
Well, darling... start another thread, give us another Same Title Challenge, and a due date (not too long... these tend to get written quickly and folks want to see results quickly) and we'll see.

I don't think votes matter, nor do I think does anonymity. I think instruction and constructive criticism is what its about. I treat Lit more as a place to learn and grow, rather than to shine. I want to learn here, and then if I do good, send my baby somewhere else to be born. Does that make sense?

of course it makes sense. i've got babies out all over the country. :D

you start the thread. ;)

i'm eyeball-deep in threads, tallying votes, and writing.

:rose:
 
Ok, then, Tris...

I'll pick the word... "yearn" or any form of said word...

Now you pick a form...

And we'll start a thread... and a date...

or how 'bout this... Title: Simpler Days

Whaddya think?
 
BooMerengue said:
Ok, then, Tris...

I'll pick the word... "yearn" or any form of said word...

Now you pick a form...

And we'll start a thread... and a date...

or how 'bout this... Title: Simpler Days

Whaddya think?


I went ahead and did it, Tris. Go look here...

Same Title Challenge
 
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