Favourite feedback

[wishfulthinking]

What's your favourite (funniest, twisted and/or wacko) feedback?

(I'm borrowing Britneyfan's thread idea).

 

[oggbashan]

This is my favourite, on a fetish story Bagged at the Opera (with virtually no sex).


I'm impressed

02/09/04 By: Anonymous

I'm a married female in her 30's, currently on anti-depressants that made my sex drive go fron 55mph to maybe 5 at best. (With my husband using every trick in the book--so to speak--at once).
That was well written, imaginative, and sexy. Plus, I think someone just FLOORED the gas pedal to the metal. Thanks. I needed that. Writer? Try to publish! You can do it.

Og

 

[TheeGoatPig]

This was for Working Out.

You Make My Pussy Dripping with fun

this story was really fun to read. It also give me some ideas when I'm working out how to get my boyfriend involve. Believe as I was reading this story was dripping wet. I felt like to start make him work out instantly

DRIPPING PUSSY

I always get a smile out of that one

 

[Lady_Guenivere]

It is a toss up between these 2...I so appreciate it when people take the time to share how my stories effected them.

Rowan Chapter 1


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=313876

by Anonymous02/17/10Sweetly written, true to form.
Preserving the sweet and innocent nature of a common tale/fantasy within the story formation and content, you've given without taking. Nicely done.

Rowan Chapter 2

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=326832

by Anonymous03/08/09Poetry
in prose form. Beautiful and tender. Thank you.

 

[TxRad]

My most favorite feed back came on "Blindman's Bluff".

I'm to lazy at the moment to go search for it but basically, it asked if I was blind. The reader asking the question was blind and went on to say that I had hit the nail on the head. I take that as the highest compliment.

 

[DG Hear]

I've been told that My stories were wonderful to Everything I write is shit and I should die. After a couple of hundred stories nothing surprises me. I guess I should be happy to receive comments at all but I much prefer the more complementary ones.

I really feel good when other authors whom I respect tell me they enjoyed something that I have written. I'm also surprised to get so many positive comments from Anonymous.
DG

 

[wishfulthinking]

They are all pretty awesome. TxRad, that is high praise!

It's nice knowing you've touched someone, and they've taken the time to give back.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

i've posted this before but i reckon it deserves another airing:

anon feedback via email. it made my day.

go on, bud, give it your best:


email 1:


I can't understand your thinking. I was a real soldier , an airborne Ranger in Korea. I would not have watched. I would have acted. I would have kicked the hell out of the guy's and gave the wife her walking papers in what ever she was wearing. But you just wanted to write some porn Right? so you had hin crouch there like an idiot watching. If you are going to write a story then use some brains, which I doubt you have> I really think that you could have had him pull on his pud which must have been hard as nails...I don't want to get nasty but you are a wimp peice of shit

email 2:

Man...er wimp. I knew that you were a bunch of shit. You talk the talk but you walk like a little faggot panty waist. You haven't even got the courage to carry through. You didn't finish the story because you had already came ( little watery drops) by just thinking of the REVENGE. You suck...hey maybe you could get even by having them fuck your butt and suck them off with the wife. She's the only one with balls in the story cause your hero just didn't have any..of course I know this is because it..( see i can't even call it a man) IT comes out of that sewer you call a mind. Put it better that toilet that ypou call a mind. If you are so good at revenge then perhaps I should rape and kill your grandmother...you wouldn't do shit to me anyway. Hell you'ld probably want to suck my cock but i don't creeps put his slimy mouth on my jewels.

email3 :

Hey I just got stoned and I had a picture in my head of Geronimo appleby...He is dressed in a tutu and fihk net stockings with five inch pumps. He is piroting and had a water pistol in his hand. He goes shoots an imaginary villiam from his stories and he flaps his wrist b, rel fairy like, and says with a lisp. By the way he has lipstick on and he is crushing a grape and looking real mean. HE HE HE HE$..well as mean as a faggot can, and says there ,,,take that you dirty rotten you old nasty man you mansey,,,

 

[wishfulthinking]

i've posted this before but i reckon it deserves another airing:

anon feedback via email. it made my day.

go on, bud, give it your best:


email 1:


I can't understand your thinking. I was a real soldier , an airborne Ranger in Korea. I would not have watched. I would have acted. I would have kicked the hell out of the guy's and gave the wife her walking papers in what ever she was wearing. But you just wanted to write some porn Right? so you had hin crouch there like an idiot watching. If you are going to write a story then use some brains, which I doubt you have> I really think that you could have had him pull on his pud which must have been hard as nails...I don't want to get nasty but you are a wimp peice of shit

email 2:

Man...er wimp. I knew that you were a bunch of shit. You talk the talk but you walk like a little faggot panty waist. You haven't even got the courage to carry through. You didn't finish the story because you had already came ( little watery drops) by just thinking of the REVENGE. You suck...hey maybe you could get even by having them fuck your butt and suck them off with the wife. She's the only one with balls in the story cause your hero just didn't have any..of course I know this is because it..( see i can't even call it a man) IT comes out of that sewer you call a mind. Put it better that toilet that ypou call a mind. If you are so good at revenge then perhaps I should rape and kill your grandmother...you wouldn't do shit to me anyway. Hell you'ld probably want to suck my cock but i don't creeps put his slimy mouth on my jewels.

email3 :

Hey I just got stoned and I had a picture in my head of Geronimo appleby...He is dressed in a tutu and fihk net stockings with five inch pumps. He is piroting and had a water pistol in his hand. He goes shoots an imaginary villiam from his stories and he flaps his wrist b, rel fairy like, and says with a lisp. By the way he has lipstick on and he is crushing a grape and looking real mean. HE HE HE HE$..well as mean as a faggot can, and says there ,,,take that you dirty rotten you old nasty man you mansey,,,

That would be so framed and on my wall. 10/10!!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

That would be so framed and on my wall. 10/10!!

i have a mental image of red-rimmed eyes, a fugue of cigarette smoke, and fingers dancing over a flaming keyboard.

... at 3am while the writer is drooling ... And naked from the waist down.

i love the way he gets more and more worked up in each mail.

yeah, i might just print and frame it.

 

[oggbashan]

Double Entendre

Comment on The Worst Chain Story Ever Ch.01

Ewww
01/04/04 By: in USA
All of the writer's stated goals have been met in this masterpiece of... Whatever it is it's a masterpiece, i'm sure of it.

 

[glynndah]

Feedback?

 

[cloudy]

There are two, both from the same story (no longer posted here):

12/11/05 by dr_mabeuse
That was honestly no-shit beautiful. No nonsense, no schmaltz, just genuinely beautiful, a story as simple and direct and heartfelt as a dream of someone who's gone. I liked this especially: "it surprised her that she hadn't felt the exact moment that he'd left it." Isn't that just the way we feel? I've lost some myself the same way, and we all feel that cold wind this time of year, I think. Truly nicely done. You just get better and better, love.

and

Once again
01/02/06 by simulacre
Once again I’ve responded to one of your stories in a purely emotional way. I don’t think this will come as a surprise to you, it didn’t to me. You paint emotions so tightly, narrowing it down to the essential. I love the way you leave room for interpretation, the way you don’t tell your reader exactly how he should feel about the situation, the way you don’t pass judgement. The word compassion comes to mind and I can’t help but think that is has to be such a strong part of who you are as a person, how else could it come through so genuinely in what you write? Surprisingly, it is not the beauty or the sadness that lingers with me after reading that story, it is hope. Isn’t hope a beautiful thing? Your stories speak to me on a deeper level than the words themselves Cloudy. I realise that I not only have great respect for the writer who gave us that story but admiration for the woman who could tell it in such a way.

 

[Boxlicker101]

These are the kinds I most like to get:

This message contains feedback for:
This feedback was sent by:
Comments: Hello, Boxlicker101 - I really love your stories. Not only are they extremely erotic, they are also well-written. You are definitely a talented man and your lady is very lucky. : ) Please keep writing; some of these scenarios I feel inspired to try on my boyfriend : )
Thank you, Tawny

This message contains feedback for:
Boxlicker101About the submission:
David's Glory Hole
This feedback was sent by:
Title: what a story
Comments:
god if that story doesn't give me a hard on and inspire me to find a glory hole nothing will. Oh please give me a rigfht hard cock to suck and suck and suck.

This message contains feedback for:
Boxlicker101About the submission: Kitty Loves a DP
This feedback was sent by:
Title: Amazing Write
Comments: I loved this story, and the way you write is amazing. Very detailed and not trashy like some of the stories that are posted on here. Definitely one of my top favorites. Thank you for the lovely images of you and Frank pleasuring Miss Kitty.

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101
About the submission: Marian and Ryan Ch. 04
This feedback was sent by:
Title: got me good and hard
Comments:
it was so hot had me cumming in no time

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101About the submission: Casting Chair Too
This feedback was sent by:
Title: your story
Comments:
i really loved ur story and it got me very hot and wet reminds me of when i blackmailed my best friends grandfather into eating me out i was 17 he was 66 and i fully enjoyed him

I may have to delete this last one.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Comments:
i really loved ur story and it got me very hot and wet reminds me of when i blackmailed my best friends grandfather into eating me out i was 17 he was 66 and i fully enjoyed him

I may have to delete this last one.

I don't think you have to. It's talking about "was" and not "am" 17, and not intercourse.

Sounds like from your comments you write some well appreciated stuff. Keep it up!

 

[wishfulthinking]

There are two, both from the same story (no longer posted here):

12/11/05 by dr_mabeuse
That was honestly no-shit beautiful. No nonsense, no schmaltz, just genuinely beautiful, a story as simple and direct and heartfelt as a dream of someone who's gone. I liked this especially: "it surprised her that she hadn't felt the exact moment that he'd left it." Isn't that just the way we feel? I've lost some myself the same way, and we all feel that cold wind this time of year, I think. Truly nicely done. You just get better and better, love.

and

Once again
01/02/06 by simulacre
Once again I’ve responded to one of your stories in a purely emotional way. I don’t think this will come as a surprise to you, it didn’t to me. You paint emotions so tightly, narrowing it down to the essential. I love the way you leave room for interpretation, the way you don’t tell your reader exactly how he should feel about the situation, the way you don’t pass judgement. The word compassion comes to mind and I can’t help but think that is has to be such a strong part of who you are as a person, how else could it come through so genuinely in what you write? Surprisingly, it is not the beauty or the sadness that lingers with me after reading that story, it is hope. Isn’t hope a beautiful thing? Your stories speak to me on a deeper level than the words themselves Cloudy. I realise that I not only have great respect for the writer who gave us that story but admiration for the woman who could tell it in such a way.

Some people write to entertain (me ), and some people write from the heart. I know which category you fall into! Your feedback is lovely and deserved.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Comment on The Worst Chain Story Ever Ch.01

Ewww

That makes me laugh! The desired effect achieved, tick.

 

[bronzeage]

I have too many favorites to pick one. Most have been very nice. A few have been the start of extended correspondence.

Feedback from men tends to be strange. I don't get much from men, but my female writer friends tell me the comments I have received from men are not unusual. One man asked "How much of the story is true?" Others asked about technical details. All seemed sincere, so I appreciate them.

I respond to all comments, if an email address is given. About once every 3 months I get an anonymous email comment, "Will you be my Daddy?" I think it is from the same person.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

I thought this one was cute:

Sick!!!
08/17/10 By: xxxxxxx
this story is sick as hell!!!
but damn i liked it lol


and this one was rather satisfying:

OOOhhhOOO.
02/26/10 By: Anonymous
Made me cream. I'm rolling over to attack the man beside me. Hats off to you, soflabbwlvr©. Rather, I'd take it all off.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Quote:
Originally Posted by Boxlicker101
Comments:
i really loved ur story and it got me very hot and wet reminds me of when i blackmailed my best friends grandfather into eating me out i was 17 he was 66 and i fully enjoyed him

I may have to delete this last one.

I don't think you have to. It's talking about "was" and not "am" 17, and not intercourse.

Sounds like from your comments you write some well appreciated stuff. Keep it up!

I was jesting about deleting it. It is intercourse, though. Bill Clinton may say otherwise, but I say it is. I write smut - unabashedly pure smut, usually with no pretense of plot or character development. There are some exceptions, but that describes most of what I do. If people like this kind of thing, they appreciate my work. If they are looking for literature, they don't like it.

 

[JeffLeigh]

Though I've only been on the site for a few weeks I got a really strange hunk of email feedback from a gal who wanted me to write her story. She literally gave me her full name and it seems as though she posted pictures although thank God I didn't get them. My BF was looking over my shoulder when I opened the email which read:

This is Brooke I am a 19-year-old college student with way too much time
On my hands. I am writing you to tell you I love your current story and, I
was wondering if I could get you to write a story about me, I
am bi, I love to tease, I love to be forced, submissive side, I have turned
my high school friend into a total lesbian, I tease her mom, I have my
nipples pierced, I was forced to do that my the girl at the Honda dealer that
sold me my car. I tease all my dad's clients, and I like to walk around with
nothing under my sundresses, please write a story about me make it long
and nasty here are some photos of me you can use, please email it back
to me at ----------------------- that is my middle and last name love
Brooke

I don't know if this is common or not. Part of me is flattered...the other part is ever so slightly horrified. I guess I'm just new to it.

Enjoy the Ride,
Cassandra Gables (AKA JeffLeigh)

 

[Boxlicker101]

Though I've only been on the site for a few weeks I got a really strange hunk of email feedback from a gal who wanted me to write her story. She literally gave me her full name and it seems as though she posted pictures although thank God I didn't get them. My BF was looking over my shoulder when I opened the email which read:

This is Brooke I am a 19-year-old college student with way too much time
On my hands. I am writing you to tell you I love your current story and, I
was wondering if I could get you to write a story about me, I
am bi, I love to tease, I love to be forced, submissive side, I have turned
my high school friend into a total lesbian, I tease her mom, I have my
nipples pierced, I was forced to do that my the girl at the Honda dealer that
sold me my car. I tease all my dad's clients, and I like to walk around with
nothing under my sundresses, please write a story about me make it long
and nasty here are some photos of me you can use, please email it back
to me at ----------------------- that is my middle and last name love
Brooke

I don't know if this is common or not. Part of me is flattered...the other part is ever so slightly horrified. I guess I'm just new to it.

Enjoy the Ride,
Cassandra Gables (AKA JeffLeigh)

She is for real. Assuming the pics I received are of her, Brooke is a very sexy Black woman. I wrote a story about her, and it just posted today, named "Brooke Loves to Tease," and I will probably write some more.

Many of my stories were written about actual people who asked me to do them. It is easier than coming up with a completely different tale, and the pics they sometimes include are very inspiring.

You know, this is a porno site and some of us, me in particular, write stories of fun sex among men, women, unicorns, werewolves and Zoopians.

 

[JeffLeigh]

Yes...well, I am new to this. It was without a doubt the most shocking thing I've ever recieved in an inbox. I was considering writing a story about her as she asked but I really didn't have any inspiration... I think I'll check out your story though. She definatelly would make a neat one.
Enjoy the Ride,
Cassandra Gables (AKA JeffLeigh)

 

[wishfulthinking]

Box, what is a Zoopian?

Jeff, no, I've never got an email like that! Brooke is one brave gal to send pics in the first email.

 

[wishfulthinking]

I have too many favorites to pick one. Most have been very nice. A few have been the start of extended correspondence.

Feedback from men tends to be strange. I don't get much from men, but my female writer friends tell me the comments I have received from men are not unusual. One man asked "How much of the story is true?" Others asked about technical details. All seemed sincere, so I appreciate them.

I respond to all comments, if an email address is given. About once every 3 months I get an anonymous email comment, "Will you be my Daddy?" I think it is from the same person.

I get mostly female. Under my other lit name, I get mostly blokes, and they ask if they can be my daddy , or if it is true, or they share a story with me.