Softouch911
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If you could read my first Lit. story ("Kelly's New Man") for me please and react to some questions? (Link is in the sig.) I'm pleased with the reaction to the story so far, but the comments don't give me a lot of info (of course), Sooooo:
A) I used Kelly's pov -- yeah, I know speaking from a woman's pov is a bit of a reach. How did I do? Did I say anything for her or about her that is really "stupid."
B) Several sex scenes, again from her pov. And the perennial guy question: "Was it good for you?" Is it arousing?
C) Are the characters believable? Any big slipups?
D) The story is supposed to be about the change Kelly and John make in their relationship. Do you think they change?
Thanks! Softie -- shuffling feet anxiously in corner
A) I used Kelly's pov -- yeah, I know speaking from a woman's pov is a bit of a reach. How did I do? Did I say anything for her or about her that is really "stupid."
B) Several sex scenes, again from her pov. And the perennial guy question: "Was it good for you?" Is it arousing?
C) Are the characters believable? Any big slipups?
D) The story is supposed to be about the change Kelly and John make in their relationship. Do you think they change?
Thanks! Softie -- shuffling feet anxiously in corner
