Father of the Brides

rounder03

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A little different take on the "wedding" idea: Widowed dad has two beautiful young daughters. After mother's death, dad has pampered the firstborn daughter & showered her with attention. Younger daughter actually does most of the cooking, cleaning, etc.
It is older daughter's wedding day. Dad is heartbroken & nearly inconsolable during the ceremony. Everyone else (including bride) thinks he is merely sad at losing his precious little girl, but younger daughter's instincts confirm what she has suspected for a while: Dad harbors a secret lust for her older sister. At the reception (after bride & groom have departed), younger daughter dances with father, whose inhibitions have been reduced by the wine he has consumed. Pressing close to her father, she feels his arousal. At the end of the evening, they go home, alone together for the first time. Morose dad slumps on couch in living room while daughter slips out of room. A short time later, Dad is startled to look up and see younger daughter in her sister's wedding dress (which has been brought home for safekeeping). Dad is puzzled until daughter confronts him with his secret desires for her sister. Before he can protest or deny the accusations, daughter tells him that, although older sis is gone, he still has her. When he seems confused, she stuns him by offering herself completely to him: as companion, helper...and lover. AS he stands before her in shock, she embraces him & tilts her head up to his. It is at this moment that Dad realizes what he should have known all along: the real jewel of the family is right in front of him. He is overcome with emotion: pride for his selfless offspring, self-doubt, shame for his neglect, attraction to her beauty.
Dad begins to apologize for his past behavior and beg her forgiveness. Daughter shushes him by placing her lips against his. Giving in to his arousal, Dad kisses her back, the embrace growing ever so much more passionate. The two pull back from the kiss & stare into each others eyes. Daughter tells dad that she loves him. He reciprocates. Then she asks if he will make her his bride and treat this as their wedding night. Taking a deep breath, Dad slowly nods...then sweeps her off her feet and carries her upstairs to the master bedroom.
A passionate honeymoon ensues for the "groom" and his virgin "bride".
Whaddayathink?
 
Followup: For a slightly more farfetched tale, how about one in which two girls who are lifelong friends decide to have a double wedding. The weekend before the wedding, they ask their dads to take them on one last father-daughter outing together. They go to the lakeside cabin owned by one family (where both families have spent many weekends together) for an afternoon of swimming, fishing, and cooking out.
To get to the point (without working out all the story details), storm comes up and strands visitors (or they decide to stay over for the night, etc.). They build a fire and sit around living room talking and passing around a bottle of wine found in the kitchen. The talk centers around the upcoming wedding. One of the girls is a sociology major, and she scolds the dads, telling them that in some primitive societies, the fathers taught their daughters EVERYTHING they needed to know about marriage. An uncomfortable and embarrassed silence ensues, broken only when the two giggling brides-to-be coax their dads to dance with them in a preview of their wedding reception dances. They tease their dads about their age, etc. and challenge them to show them how they danced with their moms. Dads playfully comply until the dancing becomes a little closer than planned. Both dads become aroused. Embarrassed to reveal their state to the other pair (not realizing that the same thing has happened), they continue to sway with their partners. This continues yada yada until somehow (inconceivably, but a skillful writer might make it work) one of the daughters whispers in her dad's ear how much she has always loved him...and asks him if he will do anything for her. When he nods, she asks him if he will show her what she needs to know on her wedding night. The dialogue then runs the gamut from shock and disapproval to (eventually) acceptance and compliance. As the four look at each other, the bolder of the two girls confesses her desires to the other father-daughter couple. The other father is shocked until HIS daughter looks at him, holding his arm tightly, and softly whispers that she would like to experience the same thing with him. As the two overwhelmed fathers exchange embarrassed glances, their daughters seize the moment to overcome any potential protests or secondguessing by putting their arms around their dads' necks and engaging them in passioante kisses. As better judgment gives way to lust, the two fathers allow their daughters to lead them to separate bedrooms. Once there, the daughters' apprehension and shyness return and the fathers take the lead.
Amid promises of undying devotion (and secrecy) and declarations that this event can never be repeated, the fathers proceed to deflower their daughters on this wild, stormy night.
The next morning, the two couples muster up enough courage to face each other over breakfast. Shame and guilt are overcome with laughter and relief when the fathers try to offer some lame denials and explanations. Now that the ice is broken, the four openly admit hwo pleasurable the experience was and that they only regret that it can't happen again. One of the girls confesses that she has another regret...that she couldn't also sleep with her friend's dad (said with much blushing & eye-averting). When she looks up, expecting nervous laughter, she sees the others aren't laughing...but they aren't looking shocked, either. Her friend's father breaks the silence by asking simply, "Well...why not?" The two girls think their dads are joking until their older lovers look at each other and nod before turning their attention back to their daughters, awaiting a sign of assent. Taking a deep breath, Daughter #2 says, "Well...why nod indeed"" and crosses the room to stand beside her friend's dad hip-to-hip and hugging his robe-clad body. Her friend goes over to the other grinning male and sits on his lap, saying "Yeah...why not?". Needless to say, the four retire to respective rooms and proceed to make love, sealing their bond more completely.
Before leaving the cabin, the four engage in one last act in the great room... this time, engaging in a swapoff on the bearskin rugs in front of the fireplace.
Too out there to be plausible? Opinions?
 
Wedding stories are not my thing.

The second idea has potential, the ending part is really stretching the story thin. Maybe if they never went to separate rooms they could swap off?

Thinking back if they had a jacuzzi or went skini-dipping back when the men were becoming aroused. Use the watere as a reason to shed some clothes and cool the men down. Perhaps a little wine, return to the main room with a fire, all in towels. That might set up the moment better?

They dance again to a different song? I don't really know, but the off to bedroom stuff twice and then an all out orgy doesn't do well for believability.

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The first idea just don't sit well at all. She is nothing but crapy seconds and she then decides to make him happy?

Part of that is kind of neat, part of it says no way would that happen not because of the situation, but because of normal human responses to issued feelings. People just don't go for someone who is love sick over someone else, and being a sister amplifies the situation. This is her dad who is neglecting her because of her sister?

Maybe if it was an equal desire for both?

My opinion is tainted as well. So take it with salt...

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Where is sir hugs?
 
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