Father and daughter en route to her wedding

[strontium190]

Hi there,

I have what I consider to be a germ of a good story. Can anyone expand or suggest if they have already seen it.

Girl is en-route to the church for her wedding, looking resplendent in her dress. Sat in the car with her is her father. They did have something going when she was in her mid teens for a short time but she moved on.

Somehow the driver has to leave. (broken down car?) or maybe the father has elected to drive.

During the delay, or journey they start to remenisce about the old times and start to fool around, which gets heavier and heavier until they start to fuck with her dress hiked up under her arms in the back of the limo.

Any good?

 

[sirhugs]

there are several variations that have done well already, but not this twist. Worth trying.

 

[Reshbod]

I'm not a big fan of incest but this story is interesting. How about they both fight off their feelings for each other, then on the car trip they reveal how they feel, then they act upon the years of built up frustration.

 

[snooper]

Having recently attended my daughter's wedding, both of us were too nervous for anything like this. I find the scenario just too wildly improbable for words. Anything which disturbed the two-hours-to-put-on decor draped over her beautiful form would have been a strict NO! NO!, even a good luck kiss on the cheek.

 

[sirhugs]

Having recently attended my daughter's wedding, both of us were too nervous for anything like this. I find the scenario just too wildly improbable for words. Anything which disturbed the two-hours-to-put-on decor draped over her beautiful form would have been a strict NO! NO!, even a good luck kiss on the cheek.

well, Ray Dario's Pulling The Bridal Train got my vote for hottest Lit story, and that bride goes way further than this, so I guess reality and fantasy need not match if the writing is excellent.

After all, most of the Bible is improbable, but millions believe.

And when did you last see a woman with snakes on her head? Or witches on the moor? Or a school for wizards?

 

[sirhugs]

I'm not a big fan of incest but this story is interesting. How about they both fight off their feelings for each other, then on the car trip they reveal how they feel, then they act upon the years of built up frustration.

I prefer trhe original idea's sense of immediacy and urgency

 

[rounder03]

For a twist, what is daughter is jilted at the altar? Single dad has raised her and now must take heartbroken daugher home. They have both consumed enough wine to overcome inhibitions but not enough be drunk. Daughter says no one will ever want her (even though father attempts to tell her how beautiful she is, etc.)Dad holds sobbing daughter (still in wedding dress); during his attempt to comfort her, he becomes slightly aroused due to her barely-concealed breasts pushing against him. She is shocked to feel her father's arousal and awkwardly pushes him away, looking deep into his eyes. She asks is he really thinks she is desirable as a woman, he fumbles for answer, she persists, yada yada yada...until they both realize how they can fulfill their mutual need for physical affection. Dad carries daughter over threshhold into bedroom. A lovely "wedding night" ensues. The end.

 

[sirhugs]

For a twist, what is daughter is jilted at the altar? Single dad has raised her and now must take heartbroken daugher home. They have both consumed enough wine to overcome inhibitions but not enough be drunk. Daughter says no one will ever want her (even though father attempts to tell her how beautiful she is, etc.)Dad holds sobbing daughter (still in wedding dress); during his attempt to comfort her, he becomes slightly aroused due to her barely-concealed breasts pushing against him. She is shocked to feel her father's arousal and awkwardly pushes him away, looking deep into his eyes. She asks is he really thinks she is desirable as a woman, he fumbles for answer, she persists, yada yada yada...until they both realize how they can fulfill their mutual need for physical affection. Dad carries daughter over threshhold into bedroom. A lovely "wedding night" ensues. The end.

nice twist
please write it.

 

[MightyZor]

Haha! I really like this concept!
I have seen similar stories where a daughter was married for some time, but not en route to wedding.


I think you should consider writing about how it was AFTER the wedding during or after the party. Newly married daughter is drunk, she feels sick, so asks daddy to take her home for some rest. On the way she, because shes drunk, starts to flirt with him and he get horny and stuff. HEhehe